Finding Love 1/1

Nov 10, 2009 01:04


Title: Finding Love 1/1
Summary: Oliver's given a second chance at finding love, now he just needs to hold onto it.
Rating: PG
Notes: This is loosely based off of Lois' dreams from her trip to the future and the upcoming episode Pandora. But it isn't really spoilerish.

Finding Love 1/1 )

ship: oliver/chloe, rating: pg, title: finding love, fandom: smallville, fanfic, one shot

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dl_greenarrow November 10 2009, 14:58:21 UTC
Wow. That was powerful. And painful. It hurt to read and actually made my stomach clench. Great job!

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calie15 November 11 2009, 00:18:59 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad everyone felt like it was a really emotional piece. That is a wonderful compliment.

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kc_2009 November 10 2009, 23:27:42 UTC
OMGlook what you do to me!! I'm crying right now!!! I def don't want to see Chloe die, but that sequence you wrote... beautiful!!
And the second part was lovely too.. they way he suddenly starts to really see her... gah, I can't write because of the teary eyes..

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calie15 November 11 2009, 00:20:15 UTC
Aw I'm sorry! But I really am glad that people took to this piece and really connected to it. Thanks for the wonderful compliments!

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cking1575 November 11 2009, 01:06:15 UTC
CALIE!!! THAT WAS BEYOND AMAZING!!! yes, I do realize that I just wrote that all in caps...I was sooo excited about this fic! I was actually sick to my stomach and teary eyed when Chloe died and felt sooo much better when I read that it was all a dream! GUH! This is how it should totally play out on the show...right down to the "visions" that Lois is having. Great job!!! You should be very proud of yourself with this fic!!! AMAZING!!:D

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calie15 November 11 2009, 03:58:07 UTC
I hated making the ending so sad, but I'm so glad about the response I got. I knew the end would make everything better. I'm so happy about the response I've gotten. Thanks alot!

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novadelphine November 11 2009, 14:03:27 UTC
That was just too good. Perfect. Do us all a favour and email that to the SV writers... you could call it "The Chlollie How-to Manual ( ... )

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reallife_oddity May 24 2010, 19:10:53 UTC
i agree one of your best ':)

lovely piece.

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