The Fall 11/?

[calie15]

Comments

[gen717]

And to think I was about to go to bed! Whoohooo, I'm so glad I didn't!

Have I told you how amazing this story is yet?

Every chapter just gets better and better. In fact after I post this comment I'm going to read this chapter again, just so I can enjoy it one more time! Great writing, great story line, everything is so well written. I'm so glad I stayed up! :D

[calie15]

Thanks! I like it too. I think it might turn out to be my longest yet. I'm still trying to work out what I want to do with Lex though. That is giving some problems. But hopefully it will come to me eventually.

[gen717]

Yeah, I'm thinking I'm stuck again, but hoping to work through it. I started back at work and life is crazy again, so I've not had much time to sit and write or come online to chat with you about stuff.

You're doing a wonderful job here. Really, this one is fast becoming my favorite of yours, it's soooo good.

[calie15]

I hope you can work through it. It's hard when you've been writing something for so long. Thanks again for the review. This story is working our really great.

[lynzie914]

So, like the loser I am I've been checking all day for an update, and this was so worth it! I absolutely loved the scene where he just wanted to be held. It was so perfect. And the Tess scene, where he grabbed her by the throat, so poetically just. I can't wait to read more and find out what happens next!

[calie15]

I know I'm so sorry for the late update! It just took forever! But I was determined to get it up. And the next chapter will pick up almost practically where the last one left off. So another chapter of Chloe/Oliver goodness before I get back into all the drama.

[kc_2009]

Ok... I'm still recovering from this... And this comment is going to be a little long, cause I don't want to hold my thoughts about this chapter

[calie15]

Thanks for the great review. But about Tess your right, he was kind of hitting rock bottom. Things had been going down hill for him and then when he kissed Chloe on that whim it was kind of the last straw for him because he realized he really needed her but he just wouldn't allow himself. So finally when she showed up, I guess he didn't hve a choice. But I know since Chloe's break down a few chapters back that it would be ridiculous if Oliver didn't have a similar episode. So I'm hoping now I can kind of get him to ease up a bit. He'll still be a bit tempermental becuase he's Oliver, but not so much to Chloe.

[kryptolori]

WOW I know I've said this before but this time I really do meant it, this was the best chapter yet! lol it just keeps getting better, I actually liked Ollie being a bit rough with Tess, it't about time! Now the Chlollie scene, gosh that was so damn good, everything that is great about Chlollie was in that scene, the comfort, passion, understanding....it was amazing, an absolutely pleasure to read again and again! Great job.

[calie15]

Well Tess did have it coming. The Chlollie scene went just the way I hoped it would, I was really happy with it.

[campbti]

That was wonderful. Just caught up with the three chapter update. This is an amazing story. I like how lost they both feel and how hard it is for them to get ahold of their feelings. But also just instinctively knowing that they need each other. This chapter especially was simply wonderful. Keep up the great work, I anxiously await another chapter.

[calie15]

They both have been pretty lost. I'm hoping at this point they kind of work through it together.