Ok... I'm still recovering from this... And this comment is going to be a little long, cause I don't want to hold my thoughts about this chapter. At the begining, I didn't like so much that Oliver was so agressive with Tess, but then I understood that he was really collapsing.... he wasn't in control of himself anymore... But all the rest, since Chloe got to Oliver's apartment... perfect, just perfect. I felt all of Oliver's anguish, fear, sadness, and also felt all of Chloe's confusion, need of comfort him, help him... Honestly, I got my eyes teary when Oliver buried his face in his hands, and then hided on Chloe's belly... he was suffering so much, and he just didn't know the right way to deal with that. But now he couldn't hold it anymore... I'm so glad to see him breaking, it broke my heart but I'm so glad, because he's starting to open his heart to Chloe... And when he asked her to stay, just to sleep... again, so perfect. I don't want things rushed between them, and this way was so tender, so sweet... All what Oliver needed was to feel her... and I think Chloe needed to be close to him too. And now he's feeling better because he's being honest with himself and with her, and Chloe's also starting to fall for him because she's now getting to know the real Oliver.
Really, so well written, I read slowly every word you wrote, to enjoy all of the emotions that you brought in this chapter... It made me almost cry, made my heart's beat rise, made me smile... I simply loved it!! And this is my official season 9 now :)
Like Gen said, I need to read this all over to enjoy again...
Thanks for the great review. But about Tess your right, he was kind of hitting rock bottom. Things had been going down hill for him and then when he kissed Chloe on that whim it was kind of the last straw for him because he realized he really needed her but he just wouldn't allow himself. So finally when she showed up, I guess he didn't hve a choice. But I know since Chloe's break down a few chapters back that it would be ridiculous if Oliver didn't have a similar episode. So I'm hoping now I can kind of get him to ease up a bit. He'll still be a bit tempermental becuase he's Oliver, but not so much to Chloe.
At the begining, I didn't like so much that Oliver was so agressive with Tess, but then I understood that he was really collapsing.... he wasn't in control of himself anymore...
But all the rest, since Chloe got to Oliver's apartment... perfect, just perfect. I felt all of Oliver's anguish, fear, sadness, and also felt all of Chloe's confusion, need of comfort him, help him... Honestly, I got my eyes teary when Oliver buried his face in his hands, and then hided on Chloe's belly... he was suffering so much, and he just didn't know the right way to deal with that. But now he couldn't hold it anymore... I'm so glad to see him breaking, it broke my heart but I'm so glad, because he's starting to open his heart to Chloe... And when he asked her to stay, just to sleep... again, so perfect. I don't want things rushed between them, and this way was so tender, so sweet... All what Oliver needed was to feel her... and I think Chloe needed to be close to him too.
And now he's feeling better because he's being honest with himself and with her, and Chloe's also starting to fall for him because she's now getting to know the real Oliver.
Really, so well written, I read slowly every word you wrote, to enjoy all of the emotions that you brought in this chapter...
It made me almost cry, made my heart's beat rise, made me smile... I simply loved it!! And this is my official season 9 now :)
Like Gen said, I need to read this all over to enjoy again...
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