SuJu Fic: The Game Part Eleven [Ending]

[cairistiona]

Part One Part Two Part Three Part Four Part Five Part Six Part Seven Part Eight Part Nine Part Ten

The rest of the day passes uneventfully. Kyuhyun doesn’t even notice what they or his parents or his fans get him, because he’s too busy basking in the joy that is all of them together.

When it’s time for bed, Kyuhyun grabs Kibum’s hand and

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[chibi_roses]

YAY I MADE IT THROUGH

Although that makes it sound like it was incredibly hard to trawl through when it really wasn't, when I saw there were 11 parts I was a bit hmm, but then I started reading and couldn't stop! The whole fic flowed perfectly from start to finish, nothing dragged, it was all entertaining and happy at the start, clueless Kyuhyun was very endearing being taken advantage of by from his "innocent" bandmates, and finding out they'd been discussing him behind his back.

And then woah, Evil!Wook was evil! I was not expecting that at all. Although neither was anyone else in the band apparently. Although, when you think about it, it's always the cute, quiet ones, the ones you least suspect. I can imagine a crazy Wook, maybe not that crazy, or crazy in a different way, but crazy nonetheless. But Kyuhyun had Teuk umma and Kangin to care for him and try draw him out again, and then Kibum, who came and made things better

[chibi_roses]

I think that's why I asked, because it really does not exist. Changmin/Donghae = does not compute! Not that there's anything wrong with it, but it's just never seen. I wonder why?

Oh that sounds adorable. And a bit heartbreaking, I get a bit upset when I read sad! Yesung because I do love him. Yay for Yesung/Kyuhyun mutual adoration. And more...
3 nights? Plenty of photo opportunities then. I can kind of imagine an almost married child Kangteuk. Who don't like being marred, but do?
Hey, it's your fic, write it how you want to. Maybe you're building up to writing the actual fic, so you get more excited as the backstories progress. Or not.

LALALA I CAN'T HEAR YOU

[cairistiona]

Changmin kind of falls in love with Donghae in Reception, haha, because everyone else ignores her because she's really eccentric. He's her best friend. I do like best friends getting together. I think half of the story is best friends getting together. *sheepish grin* It was meant to be YooHae, which also doesn't exist, but Changmin was there and I thought it would be cute. I don't know why it doesn't exist either. Maybe because the main Hae pairings are DongHo (that...is such...a funny...pairing...name...*laughs so hard*) and EunHae? :S

[chibi_roses]

It is very sweet when best friends get together. Bless eccentric Min! DongHo is hilarious. I love funny pairing names. It must be really hard to write serious fics about them. BloMi (I've read a fic with it) is also hilarious.

:( Yesungie. But she has others there to help so things will improve, yes? Ha, I can imagine Kyuhyun thinking she knows all about her friends and being oblivious until they jump her. Do they jump her? I should stop guessing your fic. Is that a hint at Kangsu friendship? Abused! in what way? This sounds a bit worrying. Is it possible for one half to be impish and the other adorable? I would say that them being impish would be adorable. To watch, maybe not if you were on the receiving end of whatever they were doing.

IDK BUT I HEAR A LIAR. COS YOU STARTED THIS

[cairistiona]

Both of them are eccentric; Hae and Min, so they kind of suit each other. ^^ Oh wow, BloMi, that is awful. *rofl* All pairings with "Bum" in them are awful, too

[chibi_roses]

It was fine, I friended you back :D I was going to do it sooner or later, I was just debating whether to ask you or just click the "add friend" and be like btw we're kinda friends now.

I've kind of got used to not sniggering at anything/Bum, but BloMi still gets me.

When I said abused it was more in response to Abused!Girl!Jungsu-unni-umma, I was wondering if it was abuse as in her friends "abuse" her or if something bad happens or not. But D: that's too many ways for a poor child to be abused! I'm glad she has her friends and a non-psycho Wookie. Ha, I can see Kyuhyun being nonchalant and "Sorry, let me redo my buttons, Kibum and Yesung tried to have sex with me again" and Teukie going "They did what now?" Aw, Hyukkie and Junsu being on a mixed football team. Are they oblivious to the other's feelings? Oh an impish! Sungmin. That caught my attention for some reason. I think when I was a Brownie the little section thing I was in was called "Imps", so now I have a picture of Brownie girl guide! Sungmin.

I AM GOOD AT CONFUSING

[cairistiona]

I feel mean now because I didn't ask, I just did it anyway, haha. :D

[chibi_roses]

Don't feel mean about it, it's great :)

Oh poor thing. How could anyone forget about Jungsu? But she meets her future mother-in-law and then Yesung and it just continues. Ah, so Yesung and Kibum can give her "the talk". Well, something involving mouths and tongues. I'm going to stop there. And yes, Heechul is Heechul. I think I'm in love with the idea of her being Kyuyun's older sister.

Father's intuition. Aha, the idea of Hae and Hyuk being princesses. Not quite suitable really. I can see them having mud fights etc and playing something like swamp football.

Yay Brownie! Sungmin. She can be the bad one who all the others secretly want to be like? Girl!whore!Brownie! Sungmin is clearly a fantastic idea (look at all the exclamation marks in the name!) You? Wreck things? It must have completely slipped past me.

THANK YOU IT'S A TALENT I PRIDE MYSELF ON. LOL I SHOULD GO ON BRITAIN'S GOT TALENT AND BE LIKE PREPARE TO BE CONFUSED. BUT I WON'T, I WILL KEEP IT HIDDEN. YOU WANTED TO MAKE PEOPLE HAPPY IS BASICALLY YOU SAYING YOU ACCEPT THE

[chibi_roses]

[chibi_roses]

I also just realised your name is on your user profile, and so is mine, but hey. Details, details

[cairistiona]

LOL yes, that is quite the case. Profiles, profiles, details, details.

(I don't know whether to reply up there or reply on MSN haha. ^^ Also, I screened your post. :D Nobody will see it. ^^)