SuJu Fic: The Game Part Eleven [Ending]
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The rest of the day passes uneventfully. Kyuhyun doesn’t even notice what they or his parents or his fans get him, because he’s too busy basking in the joy that is all of them together.
When it’s time for bed, Kyuhyun grabs Kibum’s hand and ( Read more... )
The rest of the day passes uneventfully. Kyuhyun doesn’t even notice what they or his parents or his fans get him, because he’s too busy basking in the joy that is all of them together.
When it’s time for bed, Kyuhyun grabs Kibum’s hand and ( Read more... )
It's really really heartbreaking, because nobody deserves to go through what she went through at her parents' hands.
It becomes Yesung/Kyuhyun, Kibum/Kyuhyun, Kibum/Yesung, Kibum/Yesung/Kyuhyun adoration, haha. Kyuhyun has absolutely no idea. I think she's again the naivest person in the whole fic. She hasn't a clue about how they feel about her at all.
Well Teukie realises she loves children, so the group call her Umma. Then Henry, who is just five at the time, calls Kangin Appa, and Kangin, in his head, is just like "well, I'm her best friend...it makes sense." And then he lets them call him Appa. They're so married from about seven/eight years old, but neither of them realise until they're about fifteen/sixteen. Everyone else has known forever--including Kangin's mother and Junsu's father (they play together at each other's houses a lot). ^^
^^ I really am getting more and more excited. It's so much fun. Abused!Girl!Jungsu-unni-umma is one of the nicest, sweetest characters I have ever written. And half of the characters are impish and the other half are adorable. :D If the real fic can be half as cute...
ME NEITHER. CAN SOMEONE HEAR A MOUSE?
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:( Yesungie. But she has others there to help so things will improve, yes? Ha, I can imagine Kyuhyun thinking she knows all about her friends and being oblivious until they jump her. Do they jump her? I should stop guessing your fic. Is that a hint at Kangsu friendship? Abused! in what way? This sounds a bit worrying. Is it possible for one half to be impish and the other adorable? I would say that them being impish would be adorable. To watch, maybe not if you were on the receiving end of whatever they were doing.
IDK BUT I HEAR A LIAR. COS YOU STARTED THIS
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She does. The first person she meets is Jungsu and she stick with her for her entire life kind of like her shadow. She adores Teukie more than anybody else. Things definitely improve for her--Wookie (good Wookie, haha), Kyuhyun and Teukie and Kangin are there for her, after all. ^^
They definitely jump her. And she thinks it's normal behaviour for them. She goes and tells Teukie-umma about it, and Teukie's just like O.O THEY DID WHAT? and it's cute. ^^ Because Kyuhyun genuinely hasn't a clue what they did to her.
Donghae's the football team captain, and Junsu, Kangin, Hyukkie, Yunho and a couple of others are on it (Hyukkie and Junsu proposed the idea of the mixed team), and that's how Kangin met Junsu. He likes the younger boy but thinks he's a bit mad. He also thinks that Junsu is probably the most obviously-in-love person he's ever met, from the moment he meets Junsu and Hyukkie. He doesn't even twig that Hyukkie loves Junsu back until they're about eleven or twelve, but he always knows about Junsu. :D
I don't mind you guessing what happens in my fic. It's fun to talk about it, haha. I'm enjoying this!
Abused in...all ways you could think of? It's really awful. Nobody should do that sort of thing to a six year old.
^^ Hyukkie, Junsu, Hae and Sungmin are cute when they're impish. Heechul isn't so much, haha. Henry, Kyuhyun and Yesung are just the most adorable people there.
I WAS SURE YOU STARTED IT. YOU'VE MANAGED TO CONFUSE ME. THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT. :P
[BTW I friended you, haha, is this okay?]
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I've kind of got used to not sniggering at anything/Bum, but BloMi still gets me.
When I said abused it was more in response to Abused!Girl!Jungsu-unni-umma, I was wondering if it was abuse as in her friends "abuse" her or if something bad happens or not. But D: that's too many ways for a poor child to be abused! I'm glad she has her friends and a non-psycho Wookie. Ha, I can see Kyuhyun being nonchalant and "Sorry, let me redo my buttons, Kibum and Yesung tried to have sex with me again" and Teukie going "They did what now?" Aw, Hyukkie and Junsu being on a mixed football team. Are they oblivious to the other's feelings? Oh an impish! Sungmin. That caught my attention for some reason. I think when I was a Brownie the little section thing I was in was called "Imps", so now I have a picture of Brownie girl guide! Sungmin.
I AM GOOD AT CONFUSING PEOPLE! IT IS YOUR FAULT, IF YOU HADN'T WRITTEN THE FIC IN THE FIRST PLACE I WOULDN'T HAVE FELT THE NEED TO REPLY! but I'm glad you did :D So I... happily blame you?
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I only still giggle because my flatmates think it's hilarious that he has "bum" in his name. Immature brats.
Ahhh well her mother just forgets she exists, and then she walks out one day, simple as that. Jungsu doesn't really understand, but three days later (poor starving child) she goes next door and tells the lady there that she was left alone, and she gets sent to a Children's Home where Kangin's mother works and where Yesung gets sent to after she's taken from her family.
That's...pretty much what it's like. Only Kyuhyun doesn't actually know what sex is. She never had "the talk". ^^ Kangin's mother tells Jungsu and Yesung, and Heechul (Kyuhyun's big sister) learns...who knows how she learns; she's Heechul. But Kyuhyun never gets told. So they're trying to kiss her and she's like "um, IDK what you're doing, but OK..."
Junsu and Hyukkie don't even know what they're feeling, much less what each other is feeling. However, from the very moment her parents meet Junsu and Yoochun and their family (new neighbours), her father knows that Hyukkie is going to marry him. He just knows. IDK why it's her father. Her mother's too busy crying over the amount of dirt in the bath, haha, because both Hyukkie and Hae like their dirt, and all she wanted was two princesses, and she got two football addicts instead. ^^
Oh wow, Sungmin should totally be a Brownie. I...I have to do that, seriously. It'll be made even worse by the fact I adore girl!whore!Sungmin. :D And I like wrecking things (I bet you haven't noticed *coughLIEScough* ;))!
YOU ARE, YOU REALLY ARE. AH, BUT I ONLY WROTE THE FIC TO MAKE PEOPLE HAPPY, AND IT MADE YOU HAPPY, SO THEREFORE I BLAME YOU. LOL. Sorry, can't help it. And I'm glad I did too and that you read it, because this is far too much fun.
Do you have MSN? ^u^
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Oh poor thing. How could anyone forget about Jungsu? But she meets her future mother-in-law and then Yesung and it just continues. Ah, so Yesung and Kibum can give her "the talk". Well, something involving mouths and tongues. I'm going to stop there. And yes, Heechul is Heechul. I think I'm in love with the idea of her being Kyuyun's older sister.
Father's intuition. Aha, the idea of Hae and Hyuk being princesses. Not quite suitable really. I can see them having mud fights etc and playing something like swamp football.
Yay Brownie! Sungmin. She can be the bad one who all the others secretly want to be like? Girl!whore!Brownie! Sungmin is clearly a fantastic idea (look at all the exclamation marks in the name!) You? Wreck things? It must have completely slipped past me.
THANK YOU IT'S A TALENT I PRIDE MYSELF ON. LOL I SHOULD GO ON BRITAIN'S GOT TALENT AND BE LIKE PREPARE TO BE CONFUSED. BUT I WON'T, I WILL KEEP IT HIDDEN. YOU WANTED TO MAKE PEOPLE HAPPY IS BASICALLY YOU SAYING YOU ACCEPT THE BLAME
It is such fun!. Yes I have msn. I feel weird posting it on the internet though. If I post it in another comment could you screen it or something? Else I'll get paranoid. And blame you for that :D
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(I don't know whether to reply up there or reply on MSN haha. ^^ Also, I screened your post. :D Nobody will see it. ^^)
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