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caffienekitty

SPN Fanfic: Dean's Eye View (r)

Jan 12, 2009 00:21

Title: Dean's Eye View
Characters: Dean, Sam, characters from 4.06
Warnings: SPOILERS FOR 4.06 and, sort of, 4.10. Do not read this if you have not seen 4.06, it will make even less sense. Stream-of-conciousnessy. Contains profanity. Dean started swearing and would not stop. Starts out funny-ish, then goes... not funny.
Word Count: 6500-ish words
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missing/alternate scene, spn 4.10, fanfic, supernatural, spn 4.06

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caffienekitty January 13 2009, 16:36:54 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad it turned out okay.

tahirire January 15 2009, 00:39:57 UTC

I think it was great! Very irrational and rambly. I liked the addition of the Castiel hallucination in particular. Or was it? *shifty eyes*

Another bunny sucessfully put to pasture! \o/ *applauds*

caffienekitty January 15 2009, 07:48:35 UTC

Or was it? *shifty eyes*

Heh. I'm pretty sure it was a hallucination, but only Castiel would know for sure.

Another bunny sucessfully put to pasture! \o/ *applauds*

Yep. One down, around thirty or more to go, and I hear the not-to-distant rumbling of a possible herd of new ones inbound commencing tomorrow night. :-P

firesnake77 January 15 2009, 19:36:38 UTC

De-lurking to say I really, really liked this - why Dean was so scared. I loved his internal monologues and the way he would work himself into a panic (and - Sam dead! Oh Dean!). I'll be thinking of this story the next time I watch that goofy episode. Thank you!

caffienekitty January 16 2009, 04:38:09 UTC

Hey there! Glad you liked it!

labseraph January 16 2009, 17:23:54 UTC

Beautifully done. Love how well you tread Dean's thoughts here. Seamless merging with the episode and fantastic character voice.

Yum.

caffienekitty January 16 2009, 17:30:34 UTC

Hee! Thank you! I don't think I've ever gotten a 'Yum' before! :-D

charis_kalos January 19 2009, 03:17:13 UTC

This is incredibly intense. I really appreciate the way you get into Dean's head, describe his fears, and relate them to his past. And so many of them are fears for Sam - that seems absolutely right. The episode itself was more funny than anything else - you've put the angst back.

Wonderful last line: "I'm fine," he said, and meant it as much as he ever did. Lovely summing up of Dean's approach to life.

caffienekitty January 19 2009, 06:07:18 UTC

The episode itself was more funny than anything else - you've put the angst back.

That's just it. All the way through I was going, "For Dean, this is not funny" and I had to try to get that viewpoint on the episode to balance out the perspective.

Lovely summing up of Dean's approach to life.

Thanks. :-)

charis_kalos January 19 2009, 06:29:18 UTC

"For Dean, this is not funny"

Or for Sam, and somewhere I read a story about Sam's breakdown once he was able to stop taking charge and looking for a solution and had time to realise how close he came to losing Dean again.

What would we do without fanfic to fill in the huge gaping holes TPTB leave?

caffienekitty January 19 2009, 07:00:32 UTC

Or for Sam

*nodnod* Very true.

What would we do without fanfic to fill in the huge gaping holes TPTB leave?

Probably be a great deal more frustrated. :-)