hahaha, of course who wouldn't love abs-feeling!! esp. if it's onews, u g h. thank you!! and i know, it makes my head hurt more than it already is :-( thank you for that, too!! ♡
HAHA how is this so cute! Jinki being a not-so-shy sex god-ish soccer pro. Ooh~ I like :P I liked the epilogue part a lot too! I like how Kibum had grown to love Jinki so much and Jinki's insecurities only show how he's afraid of losing Kibum which is so precious...
I'm a player, by the way. Got me laughing haha. Way to go for the pun LOL.
Naww I know what you mean the comm is completely stagnant and I wna die. Haha good luck for all the rest of the fics you're writing though! :)
I was about to sleep, but ooooh a comment. yeah, darn my short attention span. ahahahaha! sex god, i love that. he should totally be one, i mean if he isn't already (which i think he is, urgh) actually, i think i was having identity crisis here lol it's like nerd - hottie - insecured onew for me, then there's key i d e k
that was a pun i didn't mean to include, but wow. hahaha! thank you for pointing that one out! :-) and i know right sobs i need fics right now like i crave for them :-(
thank you so much! for reading, commenting and the last part, thank you dear! ♡
Legit screaming in my head because this was so cute! c: Jinki's confession was hilarious, you had me at the jerseys line but my favourite was probably this one: “What cheating? Babe, it’s only cheating if it’s a test,” Jinki takes this opportunity to hold his hand, “And this can’t be a test since I’ve already aced it a long time ago.”
I can imagine him saying that and I'd be lying if I said it doesn't give me second-hand embarrassment.
Oh and by the way, I never really got a chance to say this but I really love your fics. All of them. :) I wish I could write as nicely as you do. Looking forward to read more of your stuff!
hahahaha, squeals. thank you, thank you! o m g wat second-hand embarrassment, I feel it every time I read/make a fic like this hahaha, where jinki's being a huge cheese ball and kibum's just being him hahaha.
and thank you!! but, sobs trust me. i started from crap, and after two years of lame writing - it's finally at where i'm satisfied, but there's always room for improvement, you can always write and then improve later on ^u^ haha. thank you, dear!! ♡♡
said human being is Jinki - the one he’s been consciously hiding from but unconsciously seeking for aww I love this line ♥
^^ your fluff OnKey is adorable as always, I must admit that pick-up lines is really really lame but cute at the same time, it's so Jinki though. and the abs-feeling ♥ I think of Onew sangtae when Jinki said Kibum need to pay him abs feeling fee lol where can I pay the fee to feel his abs!?!?!?!
For me, it's been so long since I've commented and proper read a story ^^ I'm too busy with my internship and my supervisor has a habit of scolding me for no reasons T_T I've not read your Make Me Over and Places to Go; Places to Be yet even though I saved them to my computer like weeks ago. I'll go to read and comment if I'm not lazy Thank you for your writing~
o m g thank you for noticing that line, i've wanted someone to point out that line hahaha because i love it myself! ahahahaha every pick-up line's so jinki because they're as embarrassing yet cute as him hahahaha, yes/yes? i'll tell you if i ever find the abs feeling booth okay bb and i'll make sure they're jinki's abs... or jjongs, mwahaha
oh? but i think i've seen your un somewhere like, a lot of times? or that's just me. hahaha. thank you thank you!! if you ever do that i'll be forever grateful, you know ^u^ and good luck on your internship!! you can do it!! even with a grumpy supervisor at your tail, hahaha. thank you, dear!! ♡♡
oh, you've seen me a lot of times?! I wonder it was me or not :) cause I, my friends and my sister used the same account (my account) in LJ, AFF, wordpress, etc to read fanfic. They are too lazy to make themselves an account and I'm too lazy to change my password :)
Hahaha, I will bb! And if I have enough comrades, I'll kidnap SHINee myself and make doe loljk No, commenting on my fics? Ahaha, oh well. I'm just glad you do! :-) Hahaha.
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writer's block sucks so much though :( I hope you get through it! ♥
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and i know, it makes my head hurt more than it already is :-( thank you for that, too!! ♡
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I liked the epilogue part a lot too! I like how Kibum had grown to love Jinki so much and Jinki's insecurities only show how he's afraid of losing Kibum which is so precious...
I'm a player, by the way.
Got me laughing haha. Way to go for the pun LOL.
Naww I know what you mean the comm is completely stagnant and I wna die. Haha good luck for all the rest of the fics you're writing though! :)
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ahahahaha! sex god, i love that. he should totally be one, i mean if he isn't already (which i think he is, urgh)
actually, i think i was having identity crisis here lol it's like nerd - hottie - insecured onew for me, then there's key i d e k
that was a pun i didn't mean to include, but wow. hahaha! thank you for pointing that one out! :-)
and i know right sobs i need fics right now like i crave for them :-(
thank you so much! for reading, commenting and the last part, thank you dear! ♡
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“What cheating? Babe, it’s only cheating if it’s a test,” Jinki takes this opportunity to hold his hand, “And this can’t be a test since I’ve already aced it a long time ago.”
I can imagine him saying that and I'd be lying if I said it doesn't give me second-hand embarrassment.
Oh and by the way, I never really got a chance to say this but I really love your fics. All of them. :) I wish I could write as nicely as you do. Looking forward to read more of your stuff!
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o m g wat second-hand embarrassment, I feel it every time I read/make a fic like this hahaha, where jinki's being a huge cheese ball and kibum's just being him hahaha.
and thank you!! but, sobs trust me. i started from crap, and after two years of lame writing - it's finally at where i'm satisfied, but there's always room for improvement, you can always write and then improve later on ^u^ haha. thank you, dear!! ♡♡
btw, your un is so quality i love it hahaha
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aww I love this line ♥
^^ your fluff OnKey is adorable as always, I must admit that pick-up lines is really really lame but cute at the same time, it's so Jinki though.
and the abs-feeling ♥ I think of Onew sangtae when Jinki said Kibum need to pay him abs feeling fee lol where can I pay the fee to feel his abs!?!?!?!
For me, it's been so long since I've commented and proper read a story ^^ I'm too busy with my internship and my supervisor has a habit of scolding me for no reasons T_T I've not read your Make Me Over and Places to Go; Places to Be yet even though I saved them to my computer like weeks ago. I'll go to read and comment if I'm not lazy
Thank you for your writing~
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ahahahaha every pick-up line's so jinki because they're as embarrassing yet cute as him hahahaha, yes/yes?
i'll tell you if i ever find the abs feeling booth okay bb and i'll make sure they're jinki's abs... or jjongs, mwahaha
oh? but i think i've seen your un somewhere like, a lot of times? or that's just me. hahaha. thank you thank you!! if you ever do that i'll be forever grateful, you know ^u^ and good luck on your internship!! you can do it!! even with a grumpy supervisor at your tail, hahaha. thank you, dear!! ♡♡
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oh, you've seen me a lot of times?! I wonder it was me or not :) cause I, my friends and my sister used the same account (my account) in LJ, AFF, wordpress, etc to read fanfic. They are too lazy to make themselves an account and I'm too lazy to change my password :)
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No, commenting on my fics? Ahaha, oh well. I'm just glad you do! :-) Hahaha.
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I think you forgot, 'and Onkey was perfect too' loljk
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