Comments | caelumi: FIC : Tie My Hands (2) : Swim Slash : NC17 (Phelps/Lochte)

caelumi

FIC : Tie My Hands (2) : Swim Slash : NC17 (Phelps/Lochte)

Nov 05, 2008 18:13

Title: Tie My Hands (2/?)
Pair: Phelps/Lochte
Rating: NC17
Summary: Michael Phelps and Ryan Lochte? They were the best worst-kept secret of the swimming world. And Michael didn't like it.
A/N: My dragon, my leidy--as I like to say she's the Papa of this here fic, from conception to labor pains. For the good, thank her. For the bad, mea culpa.

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swimmer slash, tie my hands

Comments 37

aliform November 7 2008, 03:08:12 UTC

You are really an exceptional writer. I know this fic will be something terrific.

caelumi November 7 2008, 20:34:10 UTC

#^_^# Thank you very much!

lenaorgana November 7 2008, 10:15:39 UTC

I love the detail and just how believable everything is. It's so easy for the reader to relate to how Michael is feeling. Can't wait for updates!

caelumi November 7 2008, 20:34:57 UTC

I really, really hope that empathy holds up through the next few parts, lol. Thanks!

smellyleaf November 9 2008, 05:06:15 UTC

"Dude, it's taper."

hahahaha, I ♥ this fic, seriously. But I have a feeling that I'm going to be very, very sad before it's all over. D:

caelumi November 9 2008, 14:41:21 UTC

I try to tell myself it's all in the name of a good story... but man. Hurting Ryan is so hard to write. But there's always the happy endings to look forward to! <333

reeface November 9 2008, 10:37:01 UTC

Oh, god. I'm in so much love with this fic and the way you write the boys and just, guh, everything. ♥

caelumi November 9 2008, 14:41:57 UTC

Thank you!! <33

am3thyst November 15 2008, 23:02:49 UTC

YES, you're writing Phlocte again! I missed your writing so much, esp when there seems to be a serious lack of my swimslash OTP lately.

I can say that I'm seriously hooked even before reading this chapter. I was curious as to what happened to Michael, and his relationship between him and Ryan, esp when Michael's family seems to know about them.

Yikes, reading this chapter I think I might need to stock up on tissues ;____;. I love angst myself, as long as there is an happy ending. I love your take on their relationship - just because they are friends doesn't mean there's no rivalry and competition b/w them.

He was nervous that Ryan would win.

He was nervous that he would lose.

And he was nervous that he wouldn't care, because Ryan had become the person he counted on to fill his empty spaces.

I love these lines. Can't wait for more!

caelumi November 20 2008, 00:45:20 UTC

<33333 Before my goal had been to write everyday... But I finally wanted plot, lol. And this puppy is taking me a lot longer to write than I thought it would.

I hope to get the next section up by the week's end! Thank you for the support and love. ^____^

*gives you a box of tissues for the future* I want to give them a happy ending. I like happy endings.