FIC : Tie My Hands (2) : Swim Slash : NC17 (Phelps/Lochte)

[caelumi]

Title: Tie My Hands (2/?)
Pair: Phelps/Lochte
Rating: NC17
Summary: Michael Phelps and Ryan Lochte? They were the best worst-kept secret of the swimming world. And Michael didn't like it.
A/N: My dragon, my leidy--as I like to say she's the Papa of this here fic, from conception to labor pains. For the good, thank her. For the bad, mea culpa.

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Comments

[agape_eternal]

Ryan with his c u soon, nigga! an hour before a flight, like he couldn't stand the time between.

LMAO omg i laughed my ass off at that, seriously XD

But I love this, really. I can't wait for more.

[caelumi]

Heee... I love writing Ryan, lol. Glad you liked it! <333

[agape_eternal]

Lol I love it when you write him. Hopefully you write more.

[grungepuppie]

He was not okay with half his wardrobe vacationing in Florida
i died... lmao. good story/dialogue ! can't wait for the rest :)

[caelumi]

Thanks!!

[entropygoddess]

I'm nearly speechless so far. It's such a cut above most fanfic. Just wonderful! I love that you included Vendt, the mean line of Michael's mouth you see in some photos, the cynicism that would surely set in after months of "swim clinics" that turn into giggly grab-ass fests instead... Can't wait to see where this goes.

[caelumi]

#^__^# Thank you!!

I love putting things into fic that occur to me when I shift through too many pictures, lol. Those shots from Ryan's swim clinic, with the girls reaching for him under the water... pretty much left me speechless, lol.

And Vendt will make another appearance. ~_^

[navy_brat_1972]

So glad that you're back here, writing!

LOVE THIS! :)

Can't wait for the next part.

[caelumi]

<333333 Thanks!!

[wendies]

Omg! Freaking amazing! The details were spectacular and the dailouge and the thoughts of Michael were just spot on! U are amazing!

[caelumi]

Thank you!!!