Day late and a dollar short

[caelumi]

This is for saya415, because she liked the ear-grabbing so much. ^_^ I'm sorry. I can't write good porn under pressure, apparently.

:: Michael Phelps/Ryan Lochte, R. Unbeta'ed.

Comments

[bbmrebel]

ahhh love it - especially
"Look at that," Ryan breathes out, bitten fingernails scraping against Michael's scalp, "being double jointed comes in handy. You fold up nicely."

[caelumi]

^______^ thanks!

[caelumi]

<3 Glad you liked it ^_^

[cataroo]

Wow! *fans self* That was hot!!

[caelumi]

Thanks!

[leidy]

So I read this at work actually just before my drive home. One, awesome, and two, of course The Korean would inspire something like this.

But I shit you not, I was driving over the Golden Gate Bridge and this was the one line that just popped out at me:

"Go for gold, Mike, yeah, nn shit just like that golden boy, you're magic, you're-"

And I proceeded to have another giggle fit all by my self. I almost can't believe you actually wrote that, but then again I have to think of your inspiration...

[caelumi]

The Korean makes people do sick, twisted thing. I am only a poor little girl caught up in her great, perverted web.

*flails oh-so-helplessly*

[leidy]

The Korean may have a way with people, but there is now way I am gonna believe that you are as helpless as you make yourself out to be! Don't go using The Korean as an excuse for all of your perverted ways.

[caelumi]

>.>

Got no idea what you're talking about, lady.

*struggles to hide the horns holding the halo up...*

[leici]

I love it. Your dialog is fantastic, and the way you write makes it easy to see everything going on without getting confused or knocked out of the story by the details. You do a fabulous job of writing something both believable and hot, interesting and funny. Nicely written.

[caelumi]

##^___^## Thank you!