Comments | cadhla: Sponsorship: Velveteen vs. Balance.

cadhla

Sponsorship: Velveteen vs. Balance.

Jan 21, 2015 09:11

Title: Velveteen vs. Balance.
Summary: The trials of a formerly retired superheroine are destined never to be done, especially when the heroine in question was foolish enough to agree to serve the seasonal lands...

Today's story was sponsored by Rob and Larissa. Thanks, Rob and Larissa!

( Though she had only been in Spring for a short time, it had already been long enough for Velveteen to learn two simple truths... )

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Comments 6

lysystratae January 21 2015, 20:20:21 UTC

Thanks, Rob and Larissa (and Seanan)

vincentursus January 21 2015, 22:06:51 UTC

Ah, Velveteen is making progress.

amanda_nye January 22 2015, 05:22:19 UTC

a season that is good for her. I hope he learns to enjoy it, at least a little.

thnidu January 22 2015, 05:24:03 UTC

Oh, my.....

• where their spirits were lain to rest.
-> laid to rest

• terra incognito
-> incognita
> "Incognito" is Italian. This phrase is Latin, and "terra" is grammatically feminine, so "incognitus" has to be feminine, too.

mneme January 22 2015, 23:06:42 UTC

Oh, my.

I'm so glad she ate some of the pomegranate seeds. I like Persephone, and want to see more of her.