Iron Poet, Round XIII.

Jan 22, 2014 10:03

Welcome to the latest round of Iron Poet, the game where you give me three words and I give you a poem. This is an adaptation of a standard writer's workshop activity, and I do not claim the original concept. I just claim to enjoy doing it ( Read more... )

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janetmiles January 22 2014, 19:33:08 UTC
Hydrogen Oxygen Carbon

And, yay! Iron Poet! Thank you!

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cadhla May 8 2014, 19:28:25 UTC
"We are creatures of carbon," you said,
a pencil in your hand, graphite smudges
on your cheek; you were beautiful then,
my diamond in gray, in scientific wonder.
"We live by hydrogen, by oxygen,
by the miracles of physics and biology,
and if there is no God, then science
is enough for me, science is enough for me,
science is enough."

"We are creatures of ocean," I said,
and I took the pencil from your hand,
wiped the smudges from your cheek; smiled.
You were beautiful then, and you still are.
"We live by blood, by saltwater,
by the miracles of history and evolution,
and even without science, you would
be enough for me, you are enough for me,
this, here, is enough."

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janetmiles May 30 2014, 12:36:37 UTC
Oh, that's perfect! Thank you so much.

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