Iron Poet, Round XI.

Oct 10, 2007 20:39

Welcome to the latest round of Iron Poet, the game where you give me three words and I give you a poem. This is an adaptation of a standard writer's workshop activity, and I do not claim the original concept. I just claim to enjoy doing it ( Read more... )

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patoadam October 11 2007, 06:06:06 UTC
words: moon, stars, wind

form: six lines per stanza, a b a b c c rhyme scheme, three or four accented syllables per line.

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Unreasonable Requests. cadhla February 6 2008, 20:41:04 UTC
You asked for the moon and the stars and the sun;
You asked for the wind in a jar.
When I asked you 'why?', you said 'just get it done'.
You've always been somewhat bizarre.
But I guess I can try.
I just wish I knew why.

You always want more than I'm willing to give;
It seems you don't listen at all.
And while I attempt to say 'live and let live',
You keep my back pressed to the wall.
But I guess you don't know,
So I'll just let it go.

You asked me for structure like it was your right;
You never would hear me object.
And any attempt made to put up a fight
Is something you simply reject.
But I guess that's okay.
I'll just wander away.

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Re: Unreasonable Requests. dormouse_in_tea February 6 2008, 22:48:52 UTC
*muffled snerks*

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Re: Unreasonable Requests. patoadam February 6 2008, 23:37:42 UTC
Great poem!

Re the issue this raises, I genuinely don't understand the problem, and I will email you about it.

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Re: Unreasonable Requests. vixyish February 6 2008, 23:42:58 UTC
*gigglesnort*

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Re: Unreasonable Requests. bardling February 7 2008, 08:24:57 UTC
*chortle*

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