Iron Poet, Round XI.

Oct 10, 2007 20:39

Welcome to the latest round of Iron Poet, the game where you give me three words and I give you a poem. This is an adaptation of a standard writer's workshop activity, and I do not claim the original concept. I just claim to enjoy doing it ( Read more... )

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You're likely full up by now, but what the hey. snobahr October 11 2007, 05:51:51 UTC
  1. Potato
  2. Keyboard
  3. Albatross

I have no preference towards style or mood. Those are the 3 words that jumped out at me as I read your post, is all.

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Dinner's Source Code. cadhla February 5 2008, 22:12:52 UTC
You were sitting at your keyboard,
Eyes intent on some other world
That never actually existed,
But seems real enough to you;
When I asked you 'what's for dinner?',
You said 'baked potato, albatross,
Asparagus and watercress,
And sweet strawberry stew.'

The only thing that troubles me --
You must admit the question's fair --
Is that the kitchen smelled of things
So strange and so unknown,
That I am forced to ask you now,
My dearest and my darling one,
Just where you got that albatross,
And where the vegetables were grown.

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Re: Dinner's Source Code. snobahr February 5 2008, 22:41:00 UTC
I got it at Albert's Albatross Authority, of course! Isn't that where you get your albatross? (That's great! HEE!)

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Re: Dinner's Source Code. djonn February 6 2008, 21:26:06 UTC
This gets a Cheshire grin from me; it isn't often one sees Coleridge crossed with Carroll, but that's the vibe I get here. Nicely done indeed.

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Re: Dinner's Source Code. dormouse_in_tea February 6 2008, 22:44:33 UTC
This makes me extremely happy. It also makes me grin with lots of teeth. I think my inner predator wants to run down an albatross now. :P

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Re: Dinner's Source Code. kyrielle February 16 2008, 19:53:37 UTC
*belated glee*

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