I have no referent for 'Lilly Kane' other than 'some name that Seanan mentions a lot' -- but these lyrics read pretty darn good. I wanna hear this at OVFF!
Yum! (My inner ear thinks this wants to sound rather Tom Lehrer-ish, but my inner ear hasn't been entirely reliable in deducing Seanan-music in the past.)
One query: third line of the bridge-quatrain looks like it has a word missing: it should be "wishes she /could/ tell them....", right?
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One query: third line of the bridge-quatrain looks like it has a word missing: it should be "wishes she /could/ tell them....", right?
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Thanks for catching the missing word from the bridge, I've fixed it.
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