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cadastrophe

fic: next [1/2]

Apr 25, 2010 21:28

Title: Next [1/2]
Pairing: Santana/Brittany
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Angsting it up. This is the first part of the sequel to Now. Like Now, this is a series of answering machine messages. Expect a normally structured fic with the second part of this sequel.
Spoilers: None.
( Everything is breaking down now. )

brittany/santana, fic, angst, glee

Comments 14

spashley20 April 26 2010, 02:18:29 UTC

amazing. can't wait to see the next chapter. i feel so awful for santana. :(

more soon please.

cadastrophe April 26 2010, 20:58:39 UTC

Thank you so much for reading.

pnutbuttercups April 26 2010, 03:00:00 UTC

Poor Santana. I am now waiting for the next installment with bated breath.

cadastrophe April 26 2010, 20:59:10 UTC

I hope I don't disappoint. Thank you so much for reading.

orange_creative April 26 2010, 03:11:50 UTC

That ended surprisingly tense. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter now! I love all the hints that each message has and how they put the story together. :)

cadastrophe April 26 2010, 21:04:45 UTC

I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reading!

blueowls April 26 2010, 03:13:35 UTC

Oh, no.

I'm fine with angst. But please don't kill anyone.

This fic flows really well and, needless to say, I'm really anxious for the next part.

cadastrophe April 26 2010, 21:00:48 UTC

Don't worry! I promise no one dies!

I'm glad you like it! I just hope the ending doesn't turn out to be a complete failure. x.x

yesssirrr April 26 2010, 04:24:27 UTC

whoo angst.

also - okay, the part where puck finds Santana in chinatown. that part confused me because it's puck calling rachel and he goes, "it's santana." after rereading it, i was like, "oh okay, i get it. but i was REALLY confused." if you add "about" between It's and Santana, i feel like it'd be less confusing. but maybe it's just me, i don't know.

other than that - i can't wait for the rest of this. also - sounds like a reunion to me.

cadastrophe April 26 2010, 21:04:21 UTC

Okay, so after much consideration, I've decided that you are correct and it's been edited. I guess in my head, since it's supposed to be a message, on the voice message the male voice would immediately give away to Rachel that it's not actually Santana. Also, the phrasing of "It's Santana." sounded like a more natural thing to say when you're freaking out than, "It's about Santana." But, I guess it's hard on the readers who have no idea what I imagined, especially since I can't have people reading this out loud to sound like a man, so I changed it. So thanks for pointing that out. I think it's better this way.

In any case- a reunion is indeed in store. What'd be the point of putting them both in LA if they weren't going to run into each other? *grin*

Thank you very much for reading. :)