Comments | ca_teonatrain: original fic| First breath

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original fic| First breath

Jan 22, 2012 20:59

Title: First breath
Author: ca_te
Genre: General
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Written for Hot Chocolate Challenge #7 over at pulped_fictions. Inspired by the song "First breath after coma" by Explosions in the Sky.

( It feels like being squeezed )

rating: pg-13, original fic, genre: general

Comments 12

mizzy2k January 22 2012, 20:28:20 UTC

This is brilliantly evocative. <3

ca_te January 22 2012, 21:51:58 UTC

I'm really happy that you think so! Thank you! <3

rinhail January 24 2012, 00:27:57 UTC

So beautiful!

ca_te January 24 2012, 01:04:00 UTC

Thank you, darling! <3

1_rhiannon_1 January 24 2012, 01:13:43 UTC

I absolutely love the imagery you have in this piece!

ca_te January 24 2012, 11:54:54 UTC

Thank you so much, dear! :)

ladyarcherfan3 January 24 2012, 16:32:59 UTC

Very powerful! The imagery is just so sharp and beautiful.

ca_te January 24 2012, 20:53:45 UTC

I'm really happy that you think so! Thank you very much! :)

sabriel75 January 25 2012, 16:30:09 UTC

Oh heavens! This piece is sharp, vivid and marvelous.

ca_te January 25 2012, 19:43:30 UTC

Oh my! Thank you, darling! Your opinion means so much to me and I'm so happy that you liked this little thing! <33