Comments | c_callosum: Happy birthday, abra!

c_callosum

Happy birthday, abra!

Jun 09, 2010 20:30

Happy birthday, abra! I didn't really have any ZoNa plot bunnies to slaughter, so I just took something you posted yesterday as a prompt and ran with it. I wrote it in a rush, so it's really not very good, but I hope you enjoy this tiny slice of ZoNa!

Title: You called me what?!
Words: 807
Rating: PG
Warnings: Zoro/Nami.

( Really, Nami, surely violence is not the answer... )

fanfic, zoro x nami, zoro, nami, one piece

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quarantineabra June 10 2010, 00:57:35 UTC

...and then Sanji happened upon them making out in the moonlight and promptly went into cardiac arrest. 8D
This was fantaaastiiic! -twirls-
I love that Zoro. He's only dense when he wants to be. xD
Thank you so much for this! It's wonderful! -hug-

c_callosum June 10 2010, 03:52:53 UTC

Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it! -hugs back- :-D Enjoy the rest of your birthday!

quarantineabra June 10 2010, 03:53:50 UTC

I will! (I'm already planning on going streaking with some friends.)

c_callosum June 10 2010, 03:56:12 UTC

Er...okay. What is it people say under these circumstances..."photos or it didn't happen!"? :-P Have fun!

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zelda_addict June 10 2010, 01:31:54 UTC

Nami would be a terrifying Asura, wouldn't she? XD

I loved the tone to the dialogue in this, both the spoken and the inner monologues! Very nice!

c_callosum June 10 2010, 03:53:41 UTC

She's terrifying even without it, so yessssssss. Zoro knows.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

dandywonderous June 10 2010, 04:31:14 UTC

"he ripostes."

Someone's gettin' fancy with the vocab! XP

This was cute. In a ZoNa way. Yeah. XP

I love his line about he would, but she already has his money. XD

AND NAMI PWNED THOSE HUSSIES, WOOT WOOT!!! XD

c_callosum June 10 2010, 04:41:33 UTC

Haha. Well he's a swordsman, all his retorts might as well be ripostes! I think it's a fencing thing rather than a kendo thing though. Yup. The fact that it's French oughta be a big clue :-P

"In a ZoNa way" - and therefore not, you mean? Haha. Thanks anyway!

Yup she did. I felt like she would have a few snide remarks to say to them too but I blanked on that part of the dialogue.

dandywonderous June 10 2010, 04:47:38 UTC

Just a little clue. Haha!

No, it's very cute. ^^ I just refuse to like ZoNa because it gets on Abra's nerves, lol! XP

c_callosum June 10 2010, 05:03:16 UTC

You do a convincing job of writing ZoNa though :-P I'm not sure I could write SaNa so well...

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