Fic: Vizzini's Rule (49/105)

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Title: Vizzini's Rule, Chapter 49

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: More sad/violent(ish) images

Spoilers: Season One thru Random Shoes (1x09) and Season Two for the episode Adrift (2x11)

Disclaimer: Torchwood and all its wonderfulness belong to Russell T. Davies and the Mighty Beeb. Just goofin' around!

Summary: In which Ianto visits Flat Holm for the first

Comments

[thrace_adams]

YAY for having the laptop back!!!! WHOOOOOT!!!!!!

FH is so sad and you've done really well here. (But you knew that)

I love Ianto going out after Jack and Helen knowing where he was and everyone just adores Jack there...his heart is so big! *sigh* I love that man!

Poor Ianto...getting sick! Poor jack not being able too.

YAY FIRST COMMENT!!!!

This was just a brilliant chapter! YAY for laptop!

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I know what you mean - this chapter is sort of my valentine to Jack. :D

Yay first comment! And I am SOOOOO glad to have my laptop back. Pets laptop "good laptop, I love you laptop!" ;)

[rift_bound]

I just love Helen -- she is just so compassionate and caring, about her patients and Jack. So glad the poor rift victim realized she was safe. And so glad that Jack has Ianto to help him with this now. This was a lovely chapter.

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I love Helen too - I was really jazzed when I realized I'd get to write her. She was so cool for the 10 seconds of screen time she got!

Thanks so much for the comment!! Glad you're enjoying! :)

[morgia]

Hooo, you described this place so well, the feeling, the sadness and the anger that they can't do anything... Ho, I think I'm sad... But wait for more ! ;) Gros bisous et câlins (hugs)

[buttononthetop]

Merci! Flat Holm is a really sad place (I wish Jack would give them some money for a coat of paint!!) I'm glad I could get that across, but je suis désolé que je vous rende tristes. Would it help if I tell you there's some comfort coming up soon? :D

[morgia]

yep, its help! Ho, and in French we use the vous for more to one person or when its official or you want to be polite. So, please use tu, its more friendly !! (my students use the vous, but, really, you can use the tu (its you ) lol) Wait for next chapter "!!! Tonight ?

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I'm very polite!!

Hee - I'm never sure about the agreement for tu, so I'll use it but don't smack me if I get it wrong!!! :D *blows kiss* Next chapter is up!

[humantales]

Ianto's introduction to Flat Holm is nicely done.

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Thank so much! Glad you liked it! :o)

[teachwriteslash]

You really convey the painful nature of Flat Holm very well!

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Thank you!! It was kind of depressing to write...