Fic: Vizzini's Rule (49/105)

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Title: Vizzini's Rule, Chapter 49

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: More sad/violent(ish) images

Spoilers: Season One thru Random Shoes (1x09) and Season Two for the episode Adrift (2x11)

Disclaimer: Torchwood and all its wonderfulness belong to Russell T. Davies and the Mighty Beeb. Just goofin' around!

Summary: In which Ianto visits Flat Holm for the first

Comments

[cjharknessgirl]

Brilliant chapter! FH is such a sad place, but I think you did a really nice job of capturing it. That poor woman. :( And I love Helen in this. I agree with her, Jack's heart is too big for this world. Loved how he and Ianto sought comfort together, again I say I wish we could see this in an episode. :)

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Thank you so much! My favorite comment - what I wouldn't give to write their scripts. :D And ooooo - I just LOVE your icon!! *drool*

[cjharknessgirl]

You're welcome! And I'd love to write their scripts too, wouldn't that be great? Thanks, I put it up for teach's interlude yesterday. :)

[_miss_daisy_]

I think you really captured the pain Jack feels over having to have a place like FH well. And I wouldn't expect Ianto to react any differently to FH. This was a painful chapter to read, but I'm happy knowing that they have each other to lean on throughout all of this.

I'm looking forward to the next part hun!

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Thank you so much sweetie!! I'm so glad it came across okay, it's such a dark topic that I didn't want to blow it. And yeah, I think Jack will be much better off having Ianto to help him with FH. And I KNOW he'll enjoy the little "let me make you feel better" that Ianto has planned for him... heee.

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Exactly *nods* So glad it worked for you! Thanks bunches! :D

[hab318princess]

After reading all the comments I don't really have anything to say that hasn't been said already - this is just great and this chapter was fantastic and heartbreaking, all in one go.

[buttononthetop]

Hee, thanks - I never object to hearing the same comments more than once. Unless they're of the "you suck" variety! ;) So glad you liked it!! :D

[hab318princess]

for that it would have to be really pants, I'd just stay silent usually!

May I friend you?

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Of course! Can't have too many friends!! :D I'm flattered!

[ishouldntreally]

YAY! Ianto, YAY! Jack, YAY! Helen.

YAY!

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Yay Comment! :D Yay!!