Fic: Vizzini's Rule (37/105)

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Title: Vizzini's Rule, Chapter 37

Rating: NC-17

Warnings: Mentions of violence and some sexual situations

Spoilers: Season One thru They Keep Killing Suzie (1x8)

Disclaimer: Torchwood and all its wonderfulness belong to Russell T. Davies and the Mighty Beeb. Just goofin' around! All ©’s to Paul Tomalin and Daniel Mcculloch for dialogue and

Comments

[itoshii_chan]

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Can I kill Gwen?

PLEASE let me kill Gwen!

=___=;;

Nice missing-scene there... ^^

I eagerly await the "Risen Mitten" and "It's the button on the top" sequence!

OF COURSE! Not to forget the "Think about it... Lots of of things you can do with a stopwatch" scene!

^___^

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Of COURSE you can kill Gwen! *lends something sharp* Have at it! ;)

Thanks!! I'm so glad you enjoyed. :) TKKS is chock-full of fun scenes to play with...and that's BEFORE I get to the stopwach-scene-of-squee. *grins*

[reddevilpoes]

it is a stupid thing to kill Gwen, even though she deserves a prolonged and painful end...
There has to be somebody you can focus these stupidities on....Can't take Ianto (heaven forbids) or Tosh or even Owen...Maybe Rhys or Andy would do the honours of taking the blame for every awkward remark but it would hurt to dislike them for it...
No, it is nice to have a Gwen.

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Very very true! Every story needs a whipping-boy. ;)

[christine_twfan]

Of course Jack would need to reassure himself in some physical manner. I love how you chose to have him give rather than receive pleasure to clean his mind. HUGS!

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It's so Jack, no? :D I thought that what he really needed was to be in control of the moment, hence Ianto's fun time. :) So glad it worked!!

[morgia]

Hooo, I'm so happy you write about this episode, its my favorite episode in the season one. I really loved Suzie and the scene in the car when she talk with Jack about the life and she cry and at the end when she realise she cannot die !!! Whaaaaaaaa, at each time I watch this I stop to breathe and I feel so sad for here...
Hooo, and about this idea :“Yeah,” Jack mused, “cuff you to the cabinet, half-naked and waiting for me. Have to remember that one.” Jack gave him a bright smile. “Some other time. See you upstairs.”
You gonna write this ? Right ? Because we are soooooooooo amazing readers and we loooooooove you so much and you really want that yours so loyal readers be happy !!! If you write this I'm gonna give you a big hug and virtual cookies !!! ;)

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I like that scene in the car too! :) Won't be in the story, though, because Ianto wasn't there. :( Oh well!

Oooo - hugs and cookies?? I will SO write that scene!! (I've already had a request from my beta as well...)

Merci beaucoup, toujours!!

[morgia]

yééé ! I wait impatiently for this scene ! I have insomnia... Stress, I have to move in other city in a month for a job (teaching, new contract)... so I have a lot of stress... so yours wonderful stories are really welcome for my hours without sleep...

[thi13enthghost]

Awesome as usual. Looking forward to the next part, Ianto has some great lines in this episode. ;)

Off topic: I watched 'The Princess Bride' today, so now I finally get the title. Lol

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Thanks! I hope you enjoy my take on the ep. :)

And SO glad you saw The Princess Bride! It's a great, great movie!!

[thi13enthghost]

I really enjoyed it.

I loved it every time he said 'Inconceivable' Lmao, I'll probably end up saying that now.

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LOL "You keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means." CLASSIC!!

My friends and I can do that whole movie in our sleep! Of course, I *whispers* saw it in the theatre. Yes, I am THAT old! ;)

[alba17]

Nice little smutty interlude and liked Ianto's thoughts about the glove. That's one of my fav Owen lines about everyone becoming psychotic.

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Thank you kindly! Hee, yeah, Owen makes me laugh in this ep. :D