Made for Him Part Two

[butterflyslinky]

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[theknightreader]

I absolutely love all the details in the first chapter. They just made the backstory so much better for me :)

And that would be a fantastic explanation as to why the guy gave Linkara the gun in the first place. It almost makes me wonder if that's what Lewis had in mind in the first place.

Oh man, that ending. It makes me so happy ^_^ It's just so adorable how they danced together ^_^

[butterflyslinky]

Thank you.

I don't know if that's what he had in mind, but it seemed reasonable to me.

Couldn't help but include that. Thanks for writing in!

[aunt_zelda]

“Give me to that man,” I whispered in the ear of the madman. He was so used to obeying me by then that he did it without question. As soon as I was safe in the hand of my partner, the madman wandered off. I don’t know what happened to him, nor did I particularly care. I had found my partner. I had found my home.
That's the only thing I can imagine explaining that guy who gave Linkara the gun in the DVD extras.

I held back at first, knowing that he was young, that there was some darkness in him, as there is in everyone, but I helped him as much as I could.
Linkara does have darkness in him. I find that fascinating to explore, personally, for his character. I like that Margaret doesn't just judge him on that alone, though, she can see all of him.

When we finally spoke, face to face, I told him I wanted him to be better. And he’s tried. He’s truly tried. We’re better now than ever. And we’ll stick together until the end. I won’t leave him again

[butterflyslinky]

It was all I could imagine, too. I really hope that was what he intended.

Of course he has darkness, but Margaret knows he's basically good.

I always saw that in her when she appeared on the show. She's more of a mentor for him than anything else.

Sorry! Jaeris... sorry...

She would have to be angry if she did destroy it. I don't think she would have worked otherwise.

That last song just made me imagine them dancing together like a couple of silly kids, so I had to include that. Glad you like!

And yes, the mix was awesome. I listened to it on repeat for three or four days while writing.

[ocelot_l]

Awww. I'm so glad that after everything she's gone through, all the anger and pain and loneliness, that she finally found her true partner and a purpose for her entrapment in this world. Margaret needs Linkara to give her something good to exist for and Linkara needs Margaret to keep him balanced and fighting for right. Even if they do get angry and make mistakes, they are an amazing duo that no one will ever beat and I surely hope they are never separated ever!

I also loved how you used the scenes from the DVD to explain how Linkara got his gun, that is a funny interpretation, lol, and I really love the ending dance scene. Those two are just so sweet together!

You did a really great job with this story! :)

[butterflyslinky]

Thanks!

[butterflyslinky]

Thank you!