Seriously, awesome job on this. Just what I was looking to get with my mix. The formatting helps with the stream of conscious type narration. Each section was strong on its own, and combined they hurt in that good way.
The last line is simple and really good and is a perfect end to the story.
Oh wow....As someone who's been on both ends of a situation like this, I'm just gonna say you did a REALLY good job at, well, everything. This was beautiful and I was blubbering like a baby by the end of it.
Oh. Wow. This was really good. Very powerful and heartfelt. I could really visualize how Spoony looked and sounded throughout this story as he was overcome with negative emotions he couldn't stop or fight off on his own, and I could picture Linkara too, as he struggled to find a way to help his beloved through everything. You did an excellent job on this.
Oh, this was so sad!! I used to struggle with depression exactly like this and this mental conversation is very familiar to me, and the person that I love now still struggles with it. It's difficult to keep trying to convince the person you love the most that they deserve your love, but I'm really happy that Linkara was able to do that for Spoony. <3
This was a very personal, intense, heartfelt fic and I think you did an amazing job. :)
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Seriously, awesome job on this. Just what I was looking to get with my mix. The formatting helps with the stream of conscious type narration. Each section was strong on its own, and combined they hurt in that good way.
The last line is simple and really good and is a perfect end to the story.
I love it <3
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Though, yes. I do agree with Truly. OWWWWWW.
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Sorry! Blame SciFi's mix!
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Bahaha I ALWAYS blame SciFi XD
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This was a very personal, intense, heartfelt fic and I think you did an amazing job. :)
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