Please Part Two

[butterflyslinky]

Comments

[obnoxiousamy]

...ouch. This was very powerful; the style went well with portraying the mental discussions and wasn't confusing even with the lack of actual dialogue and so on. You said in a comment above that you haven't been in Spoony's situation, so I'm very impressed at how... well, realistically the imagery was handled. Great job!

[butterflyslinky]

Thank you! As said, I interviewed someone who had been there, so I'm glad I got it right.