Comments | butterflykiki: Firefly fic: "Divergence" (1/1)

butterflykiki

Firefly fic: "Divergence" (1/1)

Jun 28, 2004 02:08

See how productive I am, when not stressed out of my mind? A grim little idea I've had in mind for a while.

Divergence
Copyright 2004
( It starts with the proximity alert shrieking through the ship, and it ends with a puff of air leaving your lips. )

fanfic, fic, firefly

Comments 29

ltlj June 28 2004, 05:50:50 UTC

Very, very good. It had me chewing my fingernails all the way up to the end.

butterflykiki June 28 2004, 16:33:26 UTC

Thank you! I've rewritten it so many times I can't tell if the pacing works any more-- good to know it did for you. And thanks for mentioning it in your LJ! People I don't know have now read it, yayy!

suzvoy June 28 2004, 06:12:31 UTC

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek!

Oh that was so well written. Brrrr.

butterflykiki June 28 2004, 16:35:35 UTC

*chortle of glee* Result! Thank you, Suz! Very glad it works for you.

suzvoy June 28 2004, 22:09:24 UTC

gryphonrhi June 28 2004, 09:33:46 UTC

Christ on a crutch. That completely terrorized me. Congratulations and, I suspect (later), thank you.

Wow.

butterflykiki June 28 2004, 16:37:56 UTC

Oh, wow. Thank you! And, um, sorry? I've been working on it so long, the scare factor has significantly decreased for me.

Yipes! honorh June 28 2004, 11:36:30 UTC

*calms pounding heart* Wow, Chrissy. Amazing! The second person works so well for River--you always get the feeling she's seeing as well as being herself. Amazing work.

Re: Yipes! butterflykiki June 28 2004, 16:50:28 UTC

Thank you! Good, the pacing works. And Perri was right about the POV, woo!

How goes Honorificus's campaign to appropriate Adam Baldwin, btw?

teleute12 June 28 2004, 23:59:18 UTC

Eeeep that was creepy, and the part that hits me the most is how real it seems, how it could've happen, could happen, on the show. I like this story a lot, even if it will give me strange dreams for the next couple nights, now. *smile*

butterflykiki June 29 2004, 17:34:20 UTC

I hope the dreams aren't *too* bad. Muchas gracias on the feedback, though, and I'm glad you liked it.