Writhe - HirotoxOFC [Smut Shot]

[butterflyjoint]

Title: Writhe

Pairing: HirotoxOFC

Rating: NC-17

Warnings: Pon with a hard-on.

Disclaimer: I claim everything except Pon with a hard-on.

Summary: "Have you been with anyone else while I was away?" Her voice was soft, hopeful of a soothing reply, but she didn't sound as though she would reject him if he answered her question differently.

Comments

[butterflyjoint]

Oh my God.

This is...

This is...

A COMMENT FROM SOMEONE I DON'T ALREADY KNOW.

I love you!

Thanks for finding me, haha ~ x]

[butterflyjoint]

Haha, really? Got a name?

You're not AdventSephiroth221 by any chance, are you? (It popped into my head, because you refer to yourself as "Seph")

But regardless of who you are, thanks for coming after me~! I really appreciate it x]

Oh, and I'm adding to you to my friends list (and I hope you do too) since it seems like you don't accept messages from outsiders TT_TT Why does everyone disable that? I'd accept attention from virtually anyone, LOL.

[gazelove527]

I never and i mean NEVER read straight fanfic, but DAMN that was freaking epic... i loved it

-high freakin five-

[butterflyjoint]

I'm so glad you liked despite never reading straight Fanfics!

Thanks for commenting! :]

- High Five -

[yumi_kazuko28]

shoot... O////O

awesome... O.O

[butterflyjoint]

XD

Thank you ~

[narcoticblue]

Well, het smut. Definitely something new 'round here.

Though I don't read het (I'm a slash fan through and through), I'm loving your writing. I'm such a whore for lovely descriptive passages. :>

I can't write smut, like, at all. Slash or no slash. So extra points for admiration.

More please. Do you do slash? ;D

[butterflyjoint]

Haha, I was a little nervous about posting a het story on aliceinloveland, but I figured...Why not?

I'm really thrilled that you liked my writing so much, even though you're not a het fan. It made me a little more confident about posting stories here x]

Ah, and I can promise to write more, but I've never written slash before. I'm interested, though. But it'll take some practice xD

Thanks again for the lovely comment ~

[samuraisongbird]

Het writer reviewing your story here. :)

I really love how you described the teasing of each other before the sexual act, especially how Hiroto later gets back at Ruka for teasing him. XD

The sex...absolutely hot. I had to close my legs every few seconds just to show some restraint.

Great story, great description (I wish my description was that great), and I would like to read more of your het stories one day. ^___^

[butterflyjoint]

A partner in crime! xD

The teasing part was one of my favourite parts to write, so it feels very rewarding that someone enjoyed reading it as much as I liked writing it x]

Haha, and really? I love making people squirm (as you can tell from my story) so that part of your comment made my day XD

I'll definitely continue writing more stories with great encouragement like yours ~!