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White Rabbits (Star Wars, 11/?)

Jul 12, 2005 11:57

Title: White Rabbits
Chapter: 11/?
Author: Diana Michelle (butterfly)
Warnings: Spoilers for Revenge of the Sith.
Pairing: Eventual Anakin/Obi-Wan.
Rating: PG/PG-13-ish.
Summary: Anakin finds out that knowing a thing is sometimes worse than imagining what it could be.
Disclaimer: Not Lucas, don't own a thing, not making any money.
Chapter Index
( Chapter Eleven -- To Talk of Many Things )

republic trilogy, obi-wan, imperial trilogy, luke, star_wars, leia, anakin, anakin/obi-wan, white rabbits

Comments 21

jic July 12 2005, 19:20:44 UTC

*meep* Oh, excellent!

butterfly July 14 2005, 07:49:50 UTC

Thanks, hon.

logovo1 July 12 2005, 19:41:01 UTC

This was such a satyisfing chapter. *sigh*
Also, I really like how Anakin backs off at the end there with Obi-Wan, it feels very much in character.

butterfly July 14 2005, 07:50:30 UTC

Thank you!

Also, I really like how Anakin backs off at the end there with Obi-Wan, it feels very much in character.

He only pushes so far, yeah. They have such an interesting dynamic.

selenak July 12 2005, 19:42:47 UTC

Awwwww. Beautiful and painful. And just right. More!

butterfly July 14 2005, 07:52:08 UTC

Thank you! I'm just so glad that you, in particular, are liking this.

I will explain -- you are the main person that I knew who adored the Republic Trilogy before I started loving it, so, in my head, you're kind of an authority on Star Wars in general.

selenak July 14 2005, 16:45:28 UTC

*blushes and feels flattered in an Anakin-hearing-he'll-be-great-from-Palpatine-manner*

Thank you. I'm really happy you're writing SW fanfic, you know.

laniew1 July 12 2005, 21:09:56 UTC

I can't decide whose POV I like better. I adore Obi-Wan's mostly because I'm a huge Obi-Wan fan but Anakin's is damn intriguing.

And he'd sensed Obi-Wan in Luke -- so Obi-Wan had to forgive him, at some point in the future. Their relationship would mend. Obi-Wan teaching Anakin's son could mean nothing else.

I like that Obi-Wan isn't the only one trying the denial thing on for a fit.

Also I find Anakin's behaviour here somewhat heartbreaking. Because Anakin can't imagine leaving the order, and his belief that whatever has happened was obviously resolved because Obi-Wan taught Luke... that is painful. And not only because we (as well as Luke, Leia & Han) know that forgiveness was not given and that Anakin himself as Darth Vader was the one that killed Obi-Wan.

Very nicely done... more soon?

butterfly July 14 2005, 07:53:58 UTC

Thank you!

I can't decide whose POV I like better. I adore Obi-Wan's mostly because I'm a huge Obi-Wan fan but Anakin's is damn intriguing.

Obi-Wan's my favorite, but the Skywalkers as a set (and Anakin in particular) are a close second.

Also I find Anakin's behaviour here somewhat heartbreaking. Because Anakin can't imagine leaving the order, and his belief that whatever has happened was obviously resolved because Obi-Wan taught Luke... that is painful. And not only because we (as well as Luke, Leia & Han) know that forgiveness was not given and that Anakin himself as Darth Vader was the one that killed Obi-Wan.

Yeah, Anakin's bad news really hasn't stopped arriving yet.

shusu July 12 2005, 23:19:05 UTC

Eeeeeeee

Go Leia! Just plunk it out there ^^

butterfly July 14 2005, 07:55:14 UTC

Leia's definitely a brash one.

Thank you.