Therapy 10 pt.2

Jul 27, 2009 17:04


Title: Therapy 10 pt. 2
Rating: PG
Warning: Some swearing.
Disclaimer: I don't own any rights in Skins or the characters, just having some fair use fun. 
Summary: Multipart fic starting at the beginning of S. 3. It follows Naomi - diary entries and  therapy sessions consisting of 100% dialogue (a bit of a challenge I gave myself - I hope the meaning ( Read more... )

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not_about_2_try July 28 2009, 00:58:43 UTC
HSDFJSKLDJFLKSJDFLK!!!

This fic is all kinds of wonderful. Loved the throwback to flowers being pretty! That made me chuckle out loud. I nearly yelled 'SNAP!' LOL

Loved Naomi saying she likes guys but then described how she likes Emily. Her unease is so perfect.

And LMAO when the therapist asked if they'd had any further encounters and Naomi asked if she wanted video footage next time XD!! *dies*

You have no idea how much I love this story!! *bows down to your genius*

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I kind of suck at commenting, sorry in advance jst_cuz_i_can July 28 2009, 01:55:32 UTC
I've never actually commented here before but I've been lurk-reading since the first chap (which I've felt impossibly bad about the entire time, because I've always felt that it was a bit like stealing, because you obviously put a lot of thought and effort into this --and it shows-- and I don't give anything in return). Anyways, I just wanted to say that I love this series (and your filler fics as well) so very, very much, and that you do a wonderful job at showing us another side to Naomi with a very difficult writing style, you manage to portray her full and vibrant spectrum of emotions and don’t go out of character, as well as shedding some light on the thought process behind her actions (which often make her come off as a cold hearted bitch, instead of an emotionally damaged person who is simply afraid of opening up and is petrified of getting hurt). Okay I'm gonna stop now because I'm rambling.

Much love,

Chloé

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allknowing88 July 28 2009, 01:57:59 UTC
Great chapter, I really love this story! This bit made me laugh[Therapist]:Had any other encounters?[Naomi]:Of the supernatural kind? and the video footage was really funny too!

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na_smith July 28 2009, 02:04:47 UTC
Ah, finally we get to the rub. Emily keeps putting herself out there, but even knowing Naomi is interested in some manner doesn't make it any less scary for Emily either. Excuse my glee over the therapist pounding this point into Naomi's thick skull. XD I think it's the little moments in the actual series where Emily is uncertain (like in the ninth ep when Naomi is calling her and she's trying to decide whether to answer it or not when Mama Fitch comes in and interrupts) that end up worming Emily ever deeper into my heart; because she's brave, but that doesn't mean she isn't just as terrified and unsure as everyone else at the same time ( ... )

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na_smith July 28 2009, 20:46:41 UTC
BOO! I want my spoilers! :P

I can't really find the words to put together a coherent response (billion ideas trying to congeal into a solid mass that isn't just like, a blob of doom... not working XD), but I'm failing miserably. But, I know what you mean. BRAIN TWIN! LOL

Moar nao pl0x. :P

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nicestranger July 28 2009, 02:45:44 UTC
posted this on the wrong update, putting it on this one also.

Okay so I just read the whole fic, or atleast all that had been posted. And I just wanted to say I'm kinda in love. with this story. You have absolutely nailed the character of Naomi. Which unfortunately most writers can't cause they lack the humor or make her all gushy and crap. Whihc is not Naomi at all. Overall the progression of Naomi's character is also amazing with her subtly falling for Emily with each chapter. I really like this story and hope you update with another chapter soon. Keep up the good work! :D

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