Comments | burnthe_city: sunsets were never so bright (and the skies never so blue)

inyourembracex in burnthe_city

sunsets were never so bright (and the skies never so blue)

Jul 29, 2010 21:28

Title: sunsets were never so bright (and the skies never so blue)
Characters: Jenny, Nate
Rating/Word Count: PG/1,376
One-Line Excerpt: The journey was exciting and full of surprises but happy endings were dreadfully dull.

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artemisphoenix August 8 2010, 05:43:52 UTC

This is a cool take on Jenny.

Yes, Little J discovered fairytales-late, admittedly, and perhaps by acting as the villain, but she found them and she switched through the roles: heroine, damsel, villain, helper...perhaps even the wise one too, once or twice.

Very interesting. I was a bit...eh, Jenny..LATE with fairy tales, but I see it. I get where you're going. And she really does play every role. Nice catch.

Oh, awkward ending. But of course she would go for the kiss. (Who wouldn't when you have a mistletoe excuse, especially with Nate?)

inyourembracex August 8 2010, 20:32:34 UTC

Thank you for taking the time to review. I thought she did to, which is why I find her a really interesting character to write if you explore her. And who wouldn't kiss Nate? =]