Fic : Judge His Reactions (Narnia, 1/1)

[burntcopper]

Title : Judge His Reactions

Comments

[littlerhymes]

Oh, I love your Edmund. He's so frighteningly competent and controlled.

[burntcopper]

All to be summed up by 'I know, you had it sorted' in the film and his goading of Miraz in book and film. Oh yes.

[westingturtle]

"Wait until you see my brother" was right! Oh, the Pevensie boys and modern armies are such a fascinating mix!

[burntcopper]

Why do more people not write it? WHY?

Peter : 'I may be a frightening berserker, but at least I didn't run the spy network.'

[tetsubinatu]

Wow! This is a fabulous take on Edmund. I really like the 'outsider' POV. Thanks for sharing.

[burntcopper]

phew, it worked - I always get a bit scared that outsider POV becomes too much Tell not Show. even though I have such a weakness for it.

[lunamazes]

brilliant!! Go Pevensie.

[burntcopper]

:pulls out pompoms: Ooops, no, english. 'not bad, old thing.'

[realpestilence]

LJ just ate my comment, damn it. *glares*

*This* is the competent little bugger we all know and love, all right. I went "squee" and "bwahaha!" in equal measure.

I like the difficulty of blackmailing someone who's not ashamed and whose friends/family already know; and I like the avoidance of the treason question (because if it was in the country's own interests...*shifty eyes*)

It's interesting to realize that no, they *wouldn't* know anything about handling guns. They were too young before Narnia and didn't have them there. But I bet they learned fast.

Now, hopefully, the boys will get to team up. :)

[burntcopper]

I saw him first. get your own sneaky little bastard Pevensie.

Yeah. If you've been open about it from the start they can't do anything.

treason? what? :whistles innocently:

'....Pevensie just failed a test. We're really not sure how.'

I know nothing of any team-up. Nothing.