Comments | burned_phoenix: Original

burned_phoenix

Original - Poem

Jan 14, 2013 12:15

This got a little twisted, I guess. Wrote it a few weeks ago.

A Hole Inside YouThere's a hole inside you ( Read more... )

*original, *poem

Comments 8

dreamers_dh January 14 2013, 13:09:18 UTC

It sounds beautiful!

And depressing.
And very very true.

Good choice of words!

*hugs*

burned_phoenix January 15 2013, 18:05:53 UTC

thank you :) *hugs*

glad you like it, darling :)

zolac_no_miko January 14 2013, 15:27:22 UTC

I like it. It has a lot of impact, especially that last line.

burned_phoenix January 15 2013, 18:05:16 UTC

thank you, I'm really glad you like it. means a lot coming from you :)

tracyj23 January 14 2013, 17:38:34 UTC

I love it. I can almost hear music with it - dark, sad, haunting music. Gorgeous sweetie!

Also, I meant to say thank you!! for the v-gift. *hugs you tight* I'm always here - you know that. Friends. ♥

burned_phoenix January 15 2013, 18:04:31 UTC

aww, thank you :)

you're very welcome :) I'm really glad to have you! *hugs back*

sireesanwar January 17 2013, 23:44:16 UTC

That was dark but beautiful. I think I'll think about this poem when I'm feeling low.

burned_phoenix January 23 2013, 11:29:55 UTC

thank you :)

I hope you won't be thinking about it for a while then ;)

*hugs*