thirty days ; 24

[hwanjin]

b.a.p/secret ; all these thoughts in my head, they all involve you
himchan/sunhwa ; pg ; 2409 words
excluding all what if’s, sunhwa has a pretty good life.

» 30 days » day twenty-four » knowledge.

Comments

[clayray3290]

I love how you've thought so thoroughly about the dynamic that would arise from the circumstances that they're in. Your attention to detail really shows and you really take us through Sunhwa's thoughts. This was lovely!

[hwanjin]

Ooh, your comment really makes me happy! I just kept wondering what would happen if Himchan really liked her - when she's not just his ideal type, but his actual crush. Then she suddenly ended up on we got married and all I could think of was 'but what about Himchan then?' And that's where this fic came from: me over-analyzing and believing my otp will be real someday. And Sunhwa is such an interesting character, I love writing her :3

[wristvein]

oh, i loved this so much. their characters. sunhwa and himchan's wordless sort of understanding that's not really an understanding at all and with all their coyness and cryptic flirty conversations and dancing around each other up until the “there is something. between us. right?” line and i squealed bc i was like ah finally someone said something! the buildup was perfectly paced.

she just hoped it would be someone new, someone that could make her company sweat because what if.yehhhhh the way you used the "what if"s without sounding too cheesy, i was SO pleased. i love how you were able to make kwanghee someone she was close to without making him seem like a possible candidate for her affections. readers will usually want to start shipping the couple that spends the most time around each other but you were able to make it clear that some people just don't click in a romantic way, no matter how much time passes, and i thought that was great

[hwanjin]

oh, your comment gives me feelings. i'm glad you understood where i was going with this, because after i wrote it i wasn't sure i got the message across.

you know, i love kwanghee and sunhwa together. they're cute in a 'we're best friends let us conquer the world' kind of way, but i can't imagine her having any sort of real affection for him. like you said: they don't click in a romantic way. and okay, fiction is fiction and imagination is imagination, but when i see himchan and sunhwa together i see that spark. i don't know. i'm just glad you understood what i was trying to convey.

no, your comment is lovely ♥ let me share that cake with you then~

[lynneyh]

dammit this makes me ship the two even more afshkfhdsv
Love how Sunhwa and Himchan matches each other so well! and very believable ^^ nice!

[hwanjin]

they are so cute together i just can't ;wwww;
thanks for reading~

[wintercreamed]

omg I honestly love this. I mean I don't even ship them (that was before because now I do thank you very much for asking) when I started but the fic is limitless and amazing and just I enjoyed every part of it. I love the way you wrote it also, like your writing style is so precious can I just snuggle it forever ew I'm not making sense.
anyway, this was so beautiful. when I get the chance I'll surely write this couple ♥♥ thank you for writing it bb :)
/adds to fave fic list/