FIC: The Hiatus ~ Chapter Sixteen {story complete}

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Title: The Hiatus ~ Chapter Sixteen
Author bugs
Rating: T
Word Count: 3,700
Pairing: Sharon/OC, Sharon/Flynn UST, Sharon, Rusty
Spoilers: Through season 1 of Major Crimes
Summary: Sharon must deal with her past as her everyday responsibilities call for her attention.

A/N: Yes, complete. Done. No whale noises allowed!

Comments

[akachankami]

OMGOMGOMG it's over!!!! ;_;
or not =D ...

awwwwww, shy rusty about being adopted ♥ go elosha! i mean... eleanor u.u
and the big family talk ;_; we never knew about the dead children hint- lalalalalala i don't wanna know i'm not listening lalalalalala this never happened it's not true everything is sunshine and rainbows and puppies!

poor claire, so she's like the edith crawley of the situation now O.o

ROFL at rusty on the phone with poppy XD awwwwww ♥ i ship it ._.

and then all the moving on, fresh start, new life talk... at first i was ;_; and then andy came in the picture and i was =D and then nick is sticking around and i am XD LOL awwww, poor andy XD and poor confused sharon, nick is such a smartass with his 'Next time we meet, [...] We'll be strangers again, seeing each other for the first time from across a room.' LMAO XD oh dear XD

my fav quote: "I'll keep the Raydor," she said definitely, "Like a battle scar." XD ♥

I LOVED IT! *-*

[akachankami]

Cami said everything I wanted to say and even used the quote I had chosen to include in my comment :D So I'm just gonna add some *dying whale noises* :D :P :D

Roni

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No dying whales allowed! Only happy breaching whales!

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Hug Teddy, hard.

go elosha! i mean... eleanor u.u

That was a sign I was completely out of control. But I wanted to give LD props for all the roles which I enjoyed her in over the years.

we never knew about the dead children

You are funny. I should have written that ski trip chapter for you!

poor claire, so she's like the edith crawley of the situation now O.o

I didn't do that on purpose, but I totally see it now!

ROFL at rusty on the phone with poppy

I had to go for the easy laugh. Forgive me.

and then all the moving on, fresh start, new life talk... at first i was ;_; and then andy came in the picture and i was =D and then nick is sticking around and i am XD LOL awwww, poor andy XD and poor confused sharon, nick is such a smartass

Nice play by play of the emotional whiplash! And you so caught that Slick Nick move of the 'we'll be strangers' thing. I see Sharon as a pretty literal person, and that's her Achilles tendon with Nick and needing to read between the lines on everything he says.

[lindy999]

OMG that was great. I love how you ended it but I'm also hoping for a sequel :)

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I'm glad you enjoyed it, but I'm sure the real show will cast some utter bore dude as Mr. Raydor and all fic ideas will be shattered!

[lindy999]

You mean what we are reading here isn't really going to happen??? No say is ain't so....

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It doesn't even have to be my story. But I'd love to see Sharon have a guy that she can fight and love with. But considering that I found Fritz to be the cardboardiest of men, I have little hope for any love interest if they decide MM isn't too hold and would break a hip or something from secksytimes. Certainly not someone fun and manly like Andy either! /rant

[chrissykat80]

I know you said this is the end of the series, but you can do a spin off right?!?! I would love to read about the two of them fighting over her! And from where you left it I don't know who she would choose.

Anyways... What a wonderful journey! I loved reading every bit and ran to my computer every Monday morning hoping to find a new one. Thanks so much for all your hard work!

[bugsfic]

I know you said this is the end of the series, but you can do a spin off right?!?!

My excuse above is that the show will probably cast some utter dullard in the role and my fic will go down the crapper anyway.

And from where you left it I don't know who she would choose.

Exactly! I got scared of either faction hunting me down!

I loved reading every bit and ran to my computer every Monday morning hoping to find a new one. Thanks so much for all your hard work!

You're welcome! It's always such a feeling of accomplishment to post the chapters and it helps to have someone waiting to read.

[mellow_mel]

Well, that was a good ending:)
I was trying to figure out a way to tease about a threesome... But somehow it doesn't seem as funny written out as it did in my head O.o lol

Love it!
Thanks for writing EJO into a fic!

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Threesome > Just say no. :D

More EJO! Less dullness in life!

[bsg_aussiegirl]

Like all the other chapters of Hiatus, I loved this and hated it

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Ms Clever Pants Bugs, keeping both sets of shippers happy with the romantic aspect.

I was so grateful that this idea came to me partway through, because you all were starting to scare me a bit! I was just praying it would satisfy everyone to some extent.

After saying how sure I was of remaining a Nick!fangirl for this fic, I had a really big grin on my face when Andy said he was upping the ante.

Well, I hate when one of the men is neutered in a triangle to justify the pairing. Keep both men manly for Sharon!

I love the 'casting' of Lorena Gale.

One little tribute to that wonderful woman who entertained us so much.

I suppose it was drama for a tv show, but it's still an interesting point to make.

Yeah, and I find it worrisome that every man seems to want to beat Rusty too....

Well, I don't say enough how much your support means to me as a writer, not just a friend. *running away before any awkward sideways hug can happen*