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FIC: The Hiatus ~ Chapter Sixteen {story complete}

Feb 10, 2013 12:31

Title: The Hiatus ~ Chapter Sixteen
Author bugs
Rating: T
Word Count: 3,700
Pairing: Sharon/OC, Sharon/Flynn UST, Sharon, Rusty
Spoilers: Through season 1 of Major Crimes
Summary: Sharon must deal with her past as her everyday responsibilities call for her attention.

A/N: Yes, complete. Done. No whale noises allowed!

( Discussion, Sharon? What the hell have we been doing for the past twenty-five years but that? I thought we were all talked out. )

t, major crimes, suspense, sharon raydor, drama

Comments 20

urania16 February 11 2013, 13:48:08 UTC

I'm so going to miss waiting up every Sunday for a next chapter of this lovely story ( ... )

bugsfic February 17 2013, 08:54:21 UTC

I began reading this MC fic, for only one reason and that's because you wrote it. I agree with Aussiegirl, you're so talented. I like reading your fics so much that I haven't touched a book in months.

It is so fun when you find fanfiction and can gobble up like like candy. (With no calories) I'm just glad I can give that experience to someone else!

So far I seem to have satisfied both Nick and Andy fans. I hope Sharon and Rusty are the ones who 'won' this triangle!

That would make a lovely sequel. If I could think about how this would progress, you the lovely writer surely would...
No pressure here ;)

*fingers in ears* Lalalalala! I don't hear you!

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and I'll be posting something soon enough, I'm sure!

lydgate71 February 11 2013, 21:00:47 UTC

Very tricky! Clever and satisfying. I like that whatever happens in the future, it will be a fresh start. Sharon and Nick's kids were a great touch and it was really interesting to see that side of the family dynamic. That layer of their relationship felt very real and vital. Everything you write is wonderful, and I love that you finish things properly.

bugsfic February 17 2013, 10:19:23 UTC

Very tricky! Clever and satisfying. I like that whatever happens in the future, it will be a fresh start.

I didn't think Nick would go away on his own, but I also think Sharon would want to concentrate on Rusty, so what to do with him? LOL! I was pretty happy when a solution occurred to me partway through.

Sharon and Nick's kids were a great touch and it was really interesting to see that side of the family dynamic.

It was really fun to visualize and write their children. I hope we get to see them on the show. TPTB seem to be keeping things vague, so the possibilities are open.

I love that you finish things properly.

It's one of the things I really try to do, but I do have some hanging fics currently. *sigh*

hugamoose February 12 2013, 04:56:55 UTC

I am definitely sorry to see this story go! I do love the ending, rusty being adopted all of them getting along even Nick and of course the potential with Andy. It is nice to see Nick and Sharon friends. I don't think that it was necessarily that Sharon didn't want a divorce, its just that moving on is stuff whereas what we already know, we know what to expect, when we move on even if its the right thing to do, because lets face it after all this time if they handn't gotten back together by now they never will, But its the new that is scary, not knowing what to expect out of life that is the hard part ( ... )

bugsfic February 17 2013, 10:35:41 UTC

I feel at loose ends this weekend with no chapter to write! I wanted fans of both Nick and Andy to be happy with the outcome of the story and for Sharon and Rusty to be the story's real 'winners', so I'm glad to see your positive response! I know it was tough sometimes to see Sharon with another guy, but it sounds as though you enjoyed the story overall! :D

Glad to give you a little respite in what I know is a tough time.