FIC: Eleven Hours ~ Chapter Four
Title: Eleven Hours
Author: bugs
Genre: Suspense, Drama, Romance
Rating: T
Word Count: 4,800
Timestamp: Fourteen hours, eighteen minutes
A/N: Can days start having 48 hours please, thanks! Too much going on! And thanks to aussie for keeping this straight. Hopefully.
( Trust no pretenders, those who claim they have heard the word of the dying leader and will follow. Only those anointed by the Lords of Kobol, under the dark cloak of our Queen, Persephone, shall serve the dying leader, so that all humanity may feast on the milk and honey on Earth. )
Author: bugs
Genre: Suspense, Drama, Romance
Rating: T
Word Count: 4,800
Timestamp: Fourteen hours, eighteen minutes
A/N: Can days start having 48 hours please, thanks! Too much going on! And thanks to aussie for keeping this straight. Hopefully.
( Trust no pretenders, those who claim they have heard the word of the dying leader and will follow. Only those anointed by the Lords of Kobol, under the dark cloak of our Queen, Persephone, shall serve the dying leader, so that all humanity may feast on the milk and honey on Earth. )
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I feel bad for this detective with how much they're stonewalling her. She's almost like a casual fan that decided to watch an episode and now has a million questions about what's going on.
I really enjoyed that insider looking in element to Final Cut and actually wish Deanna could have been a character within the universe without the Cylon part. And the way they kept trying to cut her out felt very real. Poor Bill just wants Laura found, but he doesn't want to give an inch more than he has to.
LOL at "Does a man ever know why he's tossed out?"
He does, usually, he just chooses to ignore it.
Like he has no idea that he's passive aggressive. :D
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Thanks for the update!
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we're back to our detective! =D so after the 6of1 argument he went sleeping in her quarters LOL poor bill, kicked out of his home... LOL at
He shrugged. "Does a man ever know why he's tossed out?"
and tory O.o i don't like tory... never liked tory... i openly hate tory even in this fic, can you kill her please? *-*
i love cottle =D for how little he was in there he was EPIC nonetheless! XD
;_; will we have more waldolaura soon? i was loosing hope of seeing this on my dash again *cries*
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Not kicked out; a mutual decision to which he agreed, that he should sleep somewhere else if he knew what was good for him.
and tory O.o i don't like tory... never liked tory... i openly hate tory even in this fic, can you kill her please? *-*
My, you can be bloodthirsty when the mood strikes you!
i love cottle =D for how little he was in there he was EPIC nonetheless!
Gods, I went back and added more after Aussie whined too! There's no pleasing you ladies!
That I'm finally getting around to responding to comments gives you some idea of what a lazy turd of a writer I'm being! Am cracking the whip on my own back, no worries!
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Han is certainly amusing, making all the wrong conclusions out of Bill's quarters' items :D Love the convos with Cottle and Bill, our favourite grumpy old men :D
I'm so glad you posted a new chapter!
Roni
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It's nice that we have a concrete time stamp now - we're between Ties That Bind and Escape Velocity, right? :)
Yep. I think there's a hunk of time there, even though there's Cally's memorial service, Laura goes from a full head of hair to the wig. I think Colonials must have some sort of period of mourning before the memorial service, giving me some days!
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