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FIC: Turn the Page ~ Chapter Eighteen

Nov 06, 2011 10:56

Title: Turn the Page ~ Chapter 18
Author: bugs
Genre: AU, Drama, Romance
Rating: T+
Word Count: 3,600

( There was rarely thunder and lightning in California, but tonight the humidity created a pressure in her chest, echoing the roll of thunder. The sudden flash of light in the sky blinded her. )

birthday fics, au, romance, a/r fics, drama, t+, nunfic

Comments 60

anonymous November 6 2011, 20:34:07 UTC

Uh oh... That piece of canon dialogue brought enough bad emotions and then we jumped straight to hell...

Bill will forgive Kara and (I hope) he'll apologize to Laura :) They say make-up sex is the best kind :D

Roni

bugsfic November 7 2011, 03:31:11 UTC

That piece of canon dialogue brought enough bad emotions and then we jumped straight to hell...

Yeah, it's a pisser when canon comes back to bite you in the ass. :-\

They say make-up sex is the best kind :D

Our great minds think alike. I put the characters through the meat grinder to make yummy sausage...Er....

k_d_456_345_a November 6 2011, 20:55:33 UTC

Oh no! Please post the next installment right away...can't bear to leave them like this. (whimpers)

bugsfic November 7 2011, 03:32:24 UTC

I know! Thankfully, I tend to work on the happier bits when I'm writing the painful chapters to give me a relief. So I hope to have the next chapter up soon.

nixmom November 6 2011, 21:13:29 UTC

Oh noes!!!! Heart = broken!

I was all yay!!!! Happy secksy times again so soon? Until Lee showed up. Then I was just filled with dread! Crying for them both. Shitty! :(

bugsfic November 7 2011, 03:35:53 UTC

Until Lee showed up. Then I was just filled with dread!

I need to make a Lee the Cockblocker icon too. You're right; his appearance in a chapter is an automatic turn for the worse in the happy sexytimes department.

nixmom November 8 2011, 01:10:02 UTC

Such a dork that Leemo! Though I guess I should blame Kara too. Nope. Blaming Lee is much more fun! What a tool!

chubbs1484 November 6 2011, 21:25:01 UTC

You're killing me! They're so happy and excited and then...Leemo. Frakking Leemo. I know it was really Kara's fault, but Leemo started it showing up at Bill's when he did so I'm blaming him :(

bugsfic November 7 2011, 03:42:22 UTC

They're so happy and excited and then...Leemo.

I did feel cruel making them so darn happy, knowing what was coming next. :-\

Yes, let's blame Lee. It's so much easier.

lacklusterfic November 6 2011, 21:47:08 UTC

Oh.

bugsfic November 7 2011, 03:43:50 UTC

And with one word, you condemn me to the fiery pits of hell for all time. Nicely played, nicely played indeed.