31 years & 9 Days - BMM drabbles Valentine Challenge

Feb 15, 2011 14:10


 31 years and 9 days

By Buffymonmon

For Valentine´s challenge (BBM drabbles). Theme: Secret Crush.

A "thank you" to Cally for being a terrific beta.

7 year olds

Ennis smiled as the last sheet fell into place above them, but the boy sitting cross-legged next to him looked confused. - Is it an igloo?

- No, it´s a teepee. And we are cowboys.

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bowl_of_glow February 15 2011, 13:55:09 UTC
Oh, cute. ♥ I loved this.

Alma pressed a sweaty palm to his.

- How weird. I hope he isn´t some psycho.

*g*

Even if it's kind of sad it took Ennis so much time to realize!
Thanks for sharing :)

*hugs*

B

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buffymonmon February 15 2011, 15:15:24 UTC
Glad you liked it, B. And thanks for the feedback!

Monika

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acht_acht February 15 2011, 14:41:23 UTC
This was dead sweet - but not too sweet. You packed a lot of live into this little thing, I feel as sated and satified as if I´d read a whole book. And you even managed to throw a a few red herrings into the mix ... congrats!! :)

Clara

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zeltia February 15 2011, 14:41:29 UTC
WOW, very clever!!! I love it. Thank you so much.

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buffymonmon February 15 2011, 15:14:11 UTC
lol! Maybe somewhat of an understatement, yes?:)

Thanks for reading, Tina!

Monika

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roby100 February 15 2011, 14:50:18 UTC
Wow, for sure Jack never gave up and finally he got his man. Now I hope they'll make up for the lost time!
Thanks so much for sharing.
A big hug
Roby

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