MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: OCTOBER 2013

Oct 07, 2013 18:38

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☆ Please adhere by the coding associated with each muse(s). If a mun specifies that they only want praise, that does not mean you get to critique them anyway. If we see any kind of abuse, the comments will be deleted. Likewise, if a mun DOES NOT specify what kind of feedback they'd like, their comment will be deleted to avoid ( Read more... )

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carnage October 7 2013, 16:04:50 UTC
kakaotalk
☆MUSES: carnage

OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

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ex_adore777 October 8 2013, 01:51:18 UTC
What's up! Mostly here with general praise and the rest ( ... )

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080918 October 7 2013, 20:26:55 UTC
mucore
☆MUSES: 080918

OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT

( She's really new and hasn't gotten around interacting with others as actively as I would like, but anything helps!

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kkwonnie October 8 2013, 18:00:38 UTC
[[ Hello! ♥ Have I ever commented on one of these to you... I can't remember TT But regardless I'd still like to give your Suzy some love, because she definitely deserves it! She has so much depth; it's always a joy getting to talk with her, even though I know we haven't been around very much. TT I know Kwon gets quite silly around her a lot (or bratty OTL) but he really enjoys their serious talks, too. She's got this level of maturity, of intensity, that is really wonderful, while at the same time has that kind of goofiness I see in the real Suzy a lot, too. It's a really cool balance to see played out. It's something I often struggle with myself - this guy who's got a youthful nature, but a lot of older thoughts in his head. But for Suzy? I think you play her different sides really well, and I feel like our muses definitely relate about quite a few things! All in all I'm so happy to have a Suzy in my Kwon's life, especially yours. She's lovely TT I really look forward to more interactions and hopefully getting to scene with you ( ... )

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littlejung October 9 2013, 05:32:43 UTC
(( I know we haven't scene yet but Krystal loves your Suzy and she's lovely to have with ^^ She's absolutely adorable and I like how she compliments Krystal's icy or blunt/honest attitude. They match well together despite the obvious opposite polarities between these two xD It's a bit sad with our conflicting time zones that we couldn't make them interact more and my life is taking too much time than it should orz We'll try to come around more and bug Suzy more to give all the love she needs and deserves ^^/

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starburst October 9 2013, 18:49:48 UTC
Suzy~ I know very little of Miss A, so I can't really give much crit there I'm afraid. However, I think that Suzy is really sweet. I've played against her with both Sohyun and a (now faded) male muse a long time ago, and she's as sweet now as she was then. But sweet on the side, she does have bite, and even if it makes Sohyun blink a little sometimes, I find it pretty amazing to play against a muse that has a whole range of emotion instead of just the basic cookie cutter types. :) Keep up the good work! I hope they get closer still <3

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ttokttok October 8 2013, 04:45:05 UTC
idolbook
☆MUSES: ttokttok

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

( i'm feeling a little more confident in her voice but if there's anything else, she has a critique post on her journal. ^^

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grindin October 8 2013, 20:43:32 UTC
[[ i'm really glad jay and ailee got a chance to run across each other! even from the beginning, their conversation has had a real fluidity that we've enjoyed and it's just great to feel like they easily talk and not run out of things to talk about either. despite the teasing, we're relieved that ailee takes it really well and just overall she's a fun, cheerful muse to talk to.

as for your writing, i enjoy it so much! i know action can be a little limiting, but you make it come alive with your descriptions and ailee's thoughts and movements, and that's just appreciated so much, and makes her easy to play with.

in short, i'm just so happy these two know each other, and though it hasn't been very long, i enjoy their friendship and hope it'll continue to grow. =)

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ttokttok October 10 2013, 12:43:55 UTC
we love your ailee! obviously you know who she is close with, we notice you try to keep up with her schedule, etc. your effort in playing her is inspiring. keep it up!

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ttokttok October 13 2013, 23:17:09 UTC
dkfj i don't know what else to say but thank you, anon! ;; ♥♥

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flyalmighty October 8 2013, 14:53:14 UTC
cloudapp
☆MUSES: flyalmighty

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

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grindin October 8 2013, 21:00:00 UTC
[[ honestly, your key has been the nicest to jay that we've come across, and it just made us really happy that your muse recognized ours right away, even though they probably haven't seen each other since jay's 2pm days! he's a pleasant surprise, as we didn't think at first that key would reach out to jay like that. also, even if they don't talk a whole awful lot, i can tell that key's really thoughtful and has many layers, which is just great to see overall. =)

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