MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: JAN-FEB 2013

[bubblybliss]

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[colorsigns]

At least this time I can give you real crit and not just write something like ~they have to talk more~~~ hehe.

I guess I'm starting with the 'negative' first before I end up just praising your muse! I know Naeun is a quiet girl most of the time, but sometimes their conversations end up being really short because Eunji is getting nothing back but short replies. I'm talking about fun conversations! Not serious ones, because those I'd understand. After a while my muse just falls silent too, because it just gets hard to always think of something new to say! Also, we need to stop being so lazy with scenes. +_+

Now on to the positive!! Eunji and Naeun don't really display their friendship often, but I do think our muses compliment each other well. My muse doesn't feel weird when she's telling her 'things' (^_~) and also getting teased for it is something I really see the real Naeun doing. I like how that secret ~cheeky and violent~ side is there, too.

Yeah, Eunji will definitely never get rid of her Nana. ♥

[pinkcubes]

That's definitely my fault, lol. ;; I get distracted really easily and I think that's why their conversations die so quickly. I'll try to work on it though, thank you for pointing it out. ♥

[pinkcubes]

Naeun is really hard to keep up a steady conversation with and she's a little awkward with new people and feeling accepted. But I also know that she's very very lovely and great to interact with when she is expressing herself and isn't seemingly self-conscious.

My suggestion for her would be to allow her to really trust people more and express her wants and needs in a healthy fashion with her friends because she will get a lot more out of her relationships that way. She has a lot to offer.

I'm not sure if that's an IC flaw or a writing preference. If it's IC then maybe she'll develop it as she grows as a muse.

[windy]

kakaotalk
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[charmdust]

hi! i know very little about sehun and exo so i have nothing but praise and words of encouragement (i hope they'll be encouraging enough!) for you i'm sorry ;;!!

she actually really enjoys talking to him more than she lets on, do not be fooled. he's such a brat and he's so witty (i've also heard the real can be that way so ig you have that part of him down!) and i love that about him?! krystal sometimes has to stop and think twice before saying anything - which happens once in a blue moon. overall, he's very fun and easy for her to talk to and we like him a lot. 8( i hope you stick around long enough to see me get into exo twenty years from now. bye bye bye bye bye. ♥♥

[wingspanned]

I don't know you and you don't know me, but I just wanted to tell you that your journal name is awesome!

[yellows]

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Honestly my biggest worry with Sungjong is that he comes across as too girly or childish? I know the real is not so I try really hard to not make it seem like that. Which is why I am posting just in case it IS happening. So feedback is much appreciated! ;; ♥

[americano]

Whenever I think 'Would the real Sungjong really be this bratty?' in the next moment I think '... well he's talking to Sungyeol so duh'. I think that's the best way to put what I'm experiencing right now. XD I don't think I'm able to say anything against your characterization anyway since I'm still an Inspirit baby, but like I told you before, your muse actually makes me like the real.... '-'

I love their interaction and I'm glad we get to play out the ~abusing~ part of their love/hate relationship too! Thanks for making me like these guys. +_+ I hate you.

[yellows]

I think we are at our trying to find balance stage HAHAH. I mean I never had an active Sungyeol against Sungjong so I am getting used to their different dynamics as well. We will get their.. affectionate side down too.. sure.. LOL. I mean we have proof they cuddle sometimes!! I think it's fun though, the way they interact.

And I don't feel sorry at all for making you like them 8) at all!

[americano]

Even the cuddling they still make Do not want faces most of the time hehe. But yeah! I bet one day they won't try to kick each other's heads in. 8)

Get lost. 8)

[americano]

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I guess there isn't much to say about Sungyeol yet, but I still would love to hear any first impressions, especially if they rubbed you the wrong way, because right now I'm still working on his characterization and can change things without having too much trouble with it! Sankyu :3

[yellows]

My first impression? WHAT A BRAT!! No hahaha. I am so glad you picked him up, like honestly. Because Sungyeol is my least favorite member and already I can feel myself loving him more. You play him a lot of fun, bratty and playful and full of energy. When I saw you comment around and he was saying things like 'daebak!' I was like. Ahhh she really is looking at the details. I loved that. I think once you get used to playing him he will be even more amazing. I look forward to it at least. I mean the scenes we did between Sungjong and Yeol have been funny so far. And I like their playful interaction back and forth. So keep up the good work okay? ♥

[americano]

I love how we both play our opposite least favorite members. haha

That, actually hahahaha. The Daebak thing was the first thing he 'said in his voice' in my head. I know this sounds super creepy, but this was what gave me a bit more courage while commenting around lol. Thanks for noticing, that really means something to me. ;; I will. n_n/

[yellows]

I KNOW. It's kind of funny.

It's something he says quite a bit I have noticed so when I saw that I actually heard his voice in my head. So that was really cool XD It just really stuck out to me so I wanted to mention it!!