MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: JAN-FEB 2013

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OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)
OK ☑ UNLISTED MUSES

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At least this time I can give you real crit and not just write something like ~they have to talk more~~~ hehe.

I guess I'm starting with the 'negative' first before I end up just praising your muse! I know Naeun is a quiet girl most of the time, but sometimes their conversations end up being really short because Eunji is getting nothing back but short replies. I'm talking about fun conversations! Not serious ones, because those I'd understand. After a while my muse just falls silent too, because it just gets hard to always think of something new to say! Also, we need to stop being so lazy with scenes. +_+

Now on to the positive!! Eunji and Naeun don't really display their friendship often, but I do think our muses compliment each other well. My muse doesn't feel weird when she's telling her 'things' (^_~) and also getting teased for it is something I really see the real Naeun doing. I like how that secret ~cheeky and violent~ side is there, too.

Yeah, Eunji will definitely never get rid of her Nana. ♥

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That's definitely my fault, lol. ;; I get distracted really easily and I think that's why their conversations die so quickly. I'll try to work on it though, thank you for pointing it out. ♥

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Naeun is really hard to keep up a steady conversation with and she's a little awkward with new people and feeling accepted. But I also know that she's very very lovely and great to interact with when she is expressing herself and isn't seemingly self-conscious.

My suggestion for her would be to allow her to really trust people more and express her wants and needs in a healthy fashion with her friends because she will get a lot more out of her relationships that way. She has a lot to offer.

I'm not sure if that's an IC flaw or a writing preference. If it's IC then maybe she'll develop it as she grows as a muse.

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I'll admit she can be rather shy and a little awkward sometimes and that she doesn't express herself easily. I'll try to work on it and have her express herself a little more with the people around her.

Thank you, anon. This is definitely something I can work on. ♥