Top Hat, Chapter 3: Street Smarts

[brunette89]

Chapter 2: If It Pleases You is here

If you read, please review! Sorry it's so long, I had lots of ideas!

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To say that Alice had naughty dreams that night is an understatement. She was highly paranoid that her mother would hear something, anything, and figure out that Hatter was spending the night, so they didn’t

Comments

[tpeej]

Wonderful. I've enjoyed this story so far. More please.

[brunette89]

Thank you very much. More to come. :)

[tpeej]

Good to hear.

[sucrosesanction]

Surviving in Oysterland. Yet another chapter enjoyed. Looking forward to your next post. ^-^

[brunette89]

:)

[serskye]

nice, I'm liking it so far :-D

[brunette89]

Thank you! :)

[jazzrose343]

This was another billiant chapter.

[brunette89]

aww shucks.

[still_starling]

Brilliant. Same sole complaint as before:

Judo.

She's a black belt in Judo, or a Judan, as they're called. My fiance's enjoying this story, too, actually; just hasn't gotten this far. If he had, I'm sure he would've mentioned it. Especially because the differences in Judo and Karate are VAST -- and neither like being confused with the other. ;)

So. Judo.

[brunette89]

Thank you thank you, I really do appreciate it. I'm un beta-ed so i UBER appreciate feedback about the details! Changing it now, and thank you so so so much for reading!

[still_starling]

No worries at all. I don't have an editor for my own Alice-themed original fiction (soon to be published), since I tend to so often be an editor for others. I know, I know -- one can surely do both, but it may be a silly pride thing. Even still, I know how difficult it is to also be your own editor

[brunette89]

Wow! That sounds awesome! I might have you just give it a once over if you're ok with that! and vice, versa if you need a reader of course. :) I really appreciate it.