The Start of a Sin [Chapter 4]

[brown_cinnamon]

Title: The Start of a Sin
Author: dephi
Pairing: Pitego, Ryotego
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG - 15
Disclaimer: Own the plot, not the characters
Summary: There were times when you were put in a situation where you would have to choose one between two while each of them were completely different from each other There were times you’re your choice would lead

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[huey_tsai]

OOH. YOU POSTED!

*reads*

[brown_cinnamon]

Yes, I have.. lol~

[huey_tsai]

aww,
tego's in love with pi already. ♥

it's so sad how tego likes ryo but ryo wouldn't really reciprocate his feelings. and i believer tego's very confused right now. :D

it's sad that he cried because of all the things he's been thinking and stuff. :D

lol, getting more interesting!~
*waits for next chapter somewhen* ♥

[brown_cinnamon]

Well, kind of.. lol... :P

Yes, Tego is so confused for sure. And you know, the one with the most sin is me actually, for making tego like this.. D:
He cried.. *me too*
And I'm the one who wrote this. Evil me.. :DDDD

Next chapter? Errr...
I think I'll update one of my multichap first before continuing with a long one shot I've been writing since october (lol) and the next chapter of this at the same time. So, should be next week? Might take longer than usual since I have to submit 2 complicated papers on wednesday.. D:

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

[laftkeichan]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW~~
your tegopi is ftw!!

Is this how it feels to be needed?
love this line <333

anyway poor tego he must be so confused! *pats pats*
and pocket knife O___O gosh why ryo so heartless, but then again why i imagine him so hot with that attitude!
LOL XDD

good job hunn~
waaa u really update fast this time!
ureshiiiii ^^
ganbatte! ilu

[brown_cinnamon]

Deshou deshou deshou!
*flails*
Oh myyyyyy.... I'm kidnapping Ryo to sing ordinary over and over ♥

I update this so fast indeed. lol~
Thanks for reading and commenting hun ♥

[eightroses]

oh i am so glad i checked my friends page before going to bed :D
omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg
absolutely amazing
thats all i can get out :D
i love you for writing this
absolutely love you ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
i wish i could write like you
you are amazing ♥
there are hardly any mistakes (lol i wrote that and spongebob says 'mistake' on the tv as i typed it xD)

[brown_cinnamon]

Eh? You are about to go to bed? But there are 4 hours diff between us, so I suppose you are somewhere in australia? Err.. Sydney or Melbourne? Am I correct?

Eh? Really? I'm sooooo glad for some reason.. :D
'm not that amazing, really. I'm about to read your fic after I've finished my last 2 papers which should be submitted on wed. lol~

Eh? Really? I suppose there should be quite a lot since I write it quite in a haste and only review t once.. D:
Spongebob is love ♥

Thanks for reading and commenting...^^

[eightroses]

yep, i'm in melbourne xD
you are that amazing :D ah, you're going to read my fic? thanks ^^

[brown_cinnamon]

Wuooo... Melbourne... Some of my friends are studying at melb univ. I was about to move there too before for the univ thingy, but well, ...Yes yes, but after I've finished my papers... >.<

If I insist to read now, I'll forget my papers completely, lol. Actually both of them are group papers and I've finished all of my parts completely, but since others haven't finished it yet, I'll help around, or so.. :P

[tegomy]

woot woot~ bittersweet...that's all i can say #_#
So Yuya wanted to stab Pi cuz of Ryo's order...i'm getting more and more curious >//<
oh...let Ryo know what happened between Pi and Yuya...i wanna see his reaction *smirk*
Living with Pi means betraying Ryo...which one will he choose
I'm looking forward to rating NC-17 XDDD *just kidding*
I'm gonna read this chap again =] Thanks for updating soon

[brown_cinnamon]

Bittersweet? Ahahaha.. I'm a real evil, right? *grin*

Curious of what?
Well, Ryo's reaction... Seriously, you won't want to know.. :P

Tegoshi will choose........................
NC-17? Errr.. It's hard for me to write ittt.. Really.. Unless anyone help me

Oh my, it's my honour. Thanks for reading and commenting.. ♥

[tenten_kun]

update *__*
have Tego already fallen for Yamashita?*__*
sorry Ryo, but Tego loves only him xD

and it's getting more interesting ♥

[brown_cinnamon]

Yes~
LoL~
I'm quite a fast updater actually..
And I have known how this fic would go till the end, so I expect this to be finished not so long, I mean the time I need.. :D

LoL~
Who Tego loves.. Er... I shall say nothing.. :P

Glad you like it and thanks for reading and commenting...^^