Heartbreak Lullaby

Jul 10, 2009 20:11

Title: Heartbreak Lullaby
Author: dephi
Pairing: RyoDa, sort of
Rating: G
Disclaimer: The plot is mine.. :D
Summary: life, breath, tears, heart, and loss. 5 words with different meanings.
A/N: I frankly don't know whether this is categorized as drabbles or one-shot.. And sorry, the title and the summary didn't make much sense. I'm running out of ( Read more... )

*oneshot, r : g, p : nishikido ryo/ueda tatsuya

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hibinoasami July 10 2009, 14:40:30 UTC
SPOT !!

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hibinoasami July 10 2009, 14:43:05 UTC
ooowwhh what a nice fic :)
but i kinda cried at the end :P

hugs

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brown_cinnamon July 11 2009, 13:15:45 UTC
hehe..
Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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c_espoir July 10 2009, 14:41:21 UTC
Dephi kangen!!!!!! XDD
Lama rasae g baca fic mu......
It's so beautiful.......
It just....so touching.....

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brown_cinnamon July 11 2009, 13:19:02 UTC
muwahaha.. Iya nich dah suwi poll.. Aku aja ampe ngabisin banyak waktu buat nylesein fic spendek ini.. *sigh*
Thanks for reading and commenting dear ♥

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sashjun July 10 2009, 15:40:24 UTC
you wrote again! hurayy!!! but then *sobs* anyway a little of an educational fic isn´t it:) you still in an exam mode?
anyway I liked it, I kind of laughed a little ant the heart part:) Ryo has to pay ... well I hope deep inside it really was just temporary and they learned their lesson --- anyway hope this is not just a whim and you will resurface again ....

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brown_cinnamon July 11 2009, 13:20:52 UTC
Hahah.. Yeah, it's a little educational in a way. I'm not sure if I'm ready with a fic with real plots instead of this type.. ^^;;
Not sure about writing, but I'll try. Besides, I'm enjoying my holiday at the moment :DDD

Hahaha.. That's the least I can try. I mean, I'm bad at writing non-angst stuffs, so i really have to think hard to create something different :DDDD

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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badbatazz July 10 2009, 15:50:27 UTC
thats sad but lovely at the same time...well i love the description of each key word

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brown_cinnamon July 11 2009, 13:22:51 UTC
Hehehe...
Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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snow_meow July 10 2009, 16:13:32 UTC
Interesting fic with a sad ending but a break up is sometimes a necessary evil.

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brown_cinnamon July 11 2009, 13:23:22 UTC
haha.. Yeah. And a great twist as well, right? ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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