Heartbreak Lullaby

Jul 10, 2009 20:11

Title: Heartbreak Lullaby
Author: dephi
Pairing: RyoDa, sort of
Rating: G
Disclaimer: The plot is mine.. :D
Summary: life, breath, tears, heart, and loss. 5 words with different meanings.
A/N: I frankly don't know whether this is categorized as drabbles or one-shot.. And sorry, the title and the summary didn't make much sense. I'm running out of ( Read more... )

*oneshot, r : g, p : nishikido ryo/ueda tatsuya

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aloja July 10 2009, 16:44:05 UTC
this is truly beautiful!
It's the basic things in life, something most people will experience through their life.
My heart broke a little at the end.
This is amazing, love!

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brown_cinnamon July 11 2009, 13:27:44 UTC
yeah.. I pick those 5 after a few contemplations :DDDDDD
Thanks for reading and commenting as well, love ♥

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blaue_lucifer July 11 2009, 03:20:32 UTC
NOOOO!! dun leave tat chan!
thz for this!

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brown_cinnamon July 11 2009, 13:28:09 UTC
^^;;;
*hides*

Thanks for reading and commenting anyway ♥

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creamy_amande July 11 2009, 23:46:01 UTC
Finally you're back! Or at least from time to time, I know you're busy with studies, I get that.
But I'm happy with some of your writing skills!
But I feel it was a bit angsty right? AH but it was good, I felt it like some prompt with words but it was not really.
In the end I liked it anyway.
I missed you!

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brown_cinnamon July 12 2009, 14:25:42 UTC
Aish... They problem wasn't in my study, I think. I guess I was having a difficulty in writing yaoi fanfics these days... D:
However, Ill try to write more.. ^^;;;

I actually didn't expect people to read this. I mean, I've disappeared from here long enough to lose readers and yes that happens, not to mention that I feel like there's some pieces I had written in the past in which couldn't be beaten by my current writings, lol. I'm weird >.>

In any case, thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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jindaluver July 12 2009, 04:29:42 UTC
this is lovely and brilliant!!
i like how u somehow included some educational information (^__^)
i laughed a little at HEART..LOL!
ryo definitely gonna pay tat-chan back!
the last one is sad *sobs*

♥ it~
thanks for this~

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brown_cinnamon July 12 2009, 14:27:01 UTC
the 'heart' part was meant for an entertainment, indeed. Though I couldn't write it longer. At the very least, I've tried.. :p

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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fancyann1974 March 13 2011, 05:02:00 UTC
so sad and touching
thank you so much for sharing

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