Irony

Feb 16, 2009 20:38

Title: Irony
Author: dephi
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: The plot is mine.. :D
Summary: Fate is sometimes just so cruel. When I want to meet and see your face, I couldn't find you, but when I don't want to see your face at all, your face seems to appear everywhere. When I miss you so much, I couldn't seem to get in touch with you at all, but ( Read more... )

g : angst, *oneshot, r : pg, p : nishikido ryo/ueda tatsuya

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aloja February 16 2009, 15:34:51 UTC
Thank you!
I like this even though it's angsty.
the story is nicely written and brings up a subject that is so true, cause no matter if you love someone it doesn't mean you're meant to be together.
I really like this and I'm glad you wrote it for me too!

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brown_cinnamon February 17 2009, 15:03:39 UTC
I think I just can't write a happy end fic now. lolololol~
Somebody smack my head... XD

Honestly, I want to dedicate this one to you, I mean like real dedicate. At first, the ending was not like this, but somehow I was led into this, and this looked more satisfying. But then, it's not a good birthday fic. lol~

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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loonykatt February 16 2009, 15:39:53 UTC
I LOVE THIS ENDING.. N THIS IS BEAUTIFUL...

Because love, doesn't always mean that we will be together.
So this is the end...

tiring deshou, relationship.. *sign*

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brown_cinnamon February 17 2009, 15:05:13 UTC
Oh, really? Despite the fact that this is not happy end?
I'm glad, then... :)

Yes, it's tiring sometimes. But then, all you can do it to try it your best to keep it. If you give up, then it's already the end. That's what I thought. lol.

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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loonykatt February 17 2009, 15:09:12 UTC
but i think for them, a separation meaning their urge to care more for each other n sooner or later they will! XDDD so sequel for this?

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brown_cinnamon February 17 2009, 15:11:59 UTC
Ohhh...
I'm not sure for a sequel since I have a real long list of fic-to-update.
Ahaha.. seriously, I should stop writing new fics... D:

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snow_meow February 16 2009, 18:24:27 UTC
I think we always wish for a happy ending but life isn't about happy endings. Sometimes, we are better people when we are not with the person we love for we will not crush or hurt them,

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brown_cinnamon February 17 2009, 15:07:39 UTC
Happy ending couldn't be found easily. That's what I've learned. But then, having a happy end after putting much effort would definitely give a certain satisfying feeling. On the other hand, failure would led people into two options, whether e/she'll give up entirely, or the failure would only fire him/her up.
And in this fic's case, well.. Sometimes it's just..tiring. I guess it's just like that.

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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allboutp February 16 2009, 19:29:47 UTC
kinda sad, but its realistic
but these kind of relationship, we kinda forsee what the ending would be ne, and i think, if they are able to meet again in future and during that time they have been much more mature, if they decided to be together again, they can do it. coz after all those hardships, sure they can make it ne
its the fic i read before going to bed huhu~
thanks for this one!

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brown_cinnamon February 17 2009, 15:10:14 UTC
I tried to picture the reality, actually. Efforts are necessary. Getting something easily without any hard work would only spoil people, I guess. ahahaha... I think deeply for this. But I agree, it might happen in the future, or it might not happen. It's all up to their choices and the path they walk on, right?

Thanks for reading and commenting hon ♥

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mizuno_hikaru February 17 2009, 05:54:37 UTC
;__________;
so angst dear, but it was so beautifully written~~ ♥

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brown_cinnamon February 17 2009, 15:10:57 UTC
Oh ♥

Glad you like it, dear...^^

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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