Comments | brown_betty: Fic: Hesitation Tango

brown_betty

Fic: Hesitation Tango

Jul 03, 2005 22:04

Title: Hesitation Tango
Pairing: Bruce Wayne/Lois Lane/(Clark Kent)
Disclaimer: Not responsible for lost or stolen items.
Continuity: Before the Lane/Kent marriage.
Rating: Actually, writing this pretty much proves I can't write porn. I'd say it's pornless, but it maybe skates the edge. Suitable for mature teens.
Thanks to: jamjar, who helped me write ( Read more... )

warning: content, character: lois lane, character: clark kent, character: bruce wayne

Comments 21

caiusmajor July 4 2005, 03:07:02 UTC

Poor Lois! Even her revenge-guy leaves her in half-way through--probably for a date with Clark...;)

brown_betty July 4 2005, 03:47:49 UTC

I think Lois rocks hard, and I wanted to get her in the Bruce and Clark dynamic. But sadly... no.

rubynye July 4 2005, 03:27:22 UTC

Oh, that's rich, that's rich! Not least becase we all know who's calling. ;)

brown_betty July 4 2005, 03:49:23 UTC

I can neither confirm nor deny. =)

Glad you liked.

__marcelo July 4 2005, 03:34:01 UTC

Wow.

When Lois finds out who Bruce is, there's going to be blood.

I loved this fic - Lois and Clark's relationship should have an edge, specially at the beginning, and throwing in Bruce and Clark's only makes it more interesting.

Any bunnies for sequels?

brown_betty July 4 2005, 03:53:40 UTC

I don't like how Lois often gets shifted to the side when dealing with Bruce and Clark's relationship. In Superman and Batman for example it's, "Lois who?" I like how The Ring did it, although it could have been better.

And somehow, that led to this. Er...

Sorry, this is the size of the bunny, I'm afraid.

petronelle July 4 2005, 04:09:09 UTC

I'm going to contribute nothing more than "Yay Bruce tangoing."

brown_betty July 4 2005, 12:38:24 UTC

I wish I could remember if it was me who wrote that line or jamjar

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brown_betty July 4 2005, 13:43:36 UTC

Hey, you read my fic! [feels special]

Perhaps they share her. Bruce can't really have a wife, doesn't really want one, and Clark really does care about Lois, see. But Bruce, well, he doesn't precisely get lonely, but sometimes he has needs.

Interesting. As I see it, there's three basic possibilities for the phone call:

a) Clark is calling to tell Bruce to back the hell off. Bruce counts this as a win, because he got a rise out of Clark.
b) It actually is urgent business: Two-Face is holding someone hostage, etc.
c) Clark is calling to say, "Okay, let's have sex."

I'm not wedded to any of these, but in this fandom? The assumption is c).