Fic: Hesitation Tango

[brown_betty]

Title: Hesitation Tango
Pairing: Bruce Wayne/Lois Lane/(Clark Kent)
Disclaimer: Not responsible for lost or stolen items.
Continuity: Before the Lane/Kent marriage.
Rating: Actually, writing this pretty much proves I can't write porn. I'd say it's pornless, but it maybe skates the edge. Suitable for mature teens.
Thanks to: jamjar, who helped me write

Comments

[blythely]

Wow, and just the other day I said I wanted to read some Bruce/Lois/Clark, and Lo. It appears.

I love the image of Lois all OMGWTF on the edge of the planter, maybe with a spiky bit of palm jabbing her in the side. And then huffing off to the bar for a triple scotch.

I have no appropriate icon except Robbie.

[brown_betty]

I love the image of Lois all OMGWTF on the edge of the planter, maybe with a spiky bit of palm jabbing her in the side. And then huffing off to the bar for a triple scotch.

Heh. I'm liking it a lot too.

I'm glad it worked for you.

[jamjar]

I do like this. It cleans up nicely, and leads me to hope they may be more Bruce/Clark/Lois, or at least more triangulation and proxyporn, in your future.

Side note: I transferred the rest of my paid account over to you when I switched to a permenant one. Did that go through?

[brown_betty]

Indeed it did, and I have been trying to think of some suitably extravagant way to thank you. Would you like my firstborn?

[jamjar]

Vril! or Kon/any and all members fo the Batfamily (Tim and Cass being the obvious ones, but Dick or Bruce as well) must huddle together to keep warm.

[brown_betty]

Yis boss.

Huddle-together-to-keep-warm fic! My favourite. Although with me, you never know. They might just huddle.

[chalcopyrite]

rubynye having conditioned me to the "sushi = sex" equation, I was lost from the first paragraph. The slightly miffed tone Lois has throughout (Because he's impulsive and uncouth like that; She couldn't care less about Clark if he's not going to bother to show up) is perfect. I can *see* the head-toss. And then Bruce just *leaving* -- oooh. Triple scotch definitely in order. *G*

[brown_betty]

Thanks! jamjar may have written the lines you admire, my memory is a little fuzzy, but the Lois voice was a lot of fun to write. I love Lois, although I'm not too nice to her in this fic. She's awesome.

[darenothope]

I was googling Bruce/Lois fic because I love that pairing, second only to Lois/Clark. I think Bruce and Lois are awesome together.

This fic was awesome and written really well.

Was it Clark on the phone to Bruce? Or there was a hero emergency he had to rush to?

That was great. If you know of any more Bruce/Lois fics point me in the right direction.

[brown_betty]

Thank you! I really enjoy the Bruce/Lois dynamic, they've got a great tension.

I'm certain it was Clark on the phone to Bruce: I'm not certain what he says.

The closest thing to more Bruce/Lois I can offer you is the World's Finest movie that got me started on them as a pairing; you can see all my posts on the topic tagged. Other than that, I can only suggest jamjar's Laugh and Lie Down, a Clark/Lois threesome, which I'm very fond of.

[darenothope]

I have yet to get World's Finest. I've seen bits of it on YouTube.

I read Laugh and Lie Down ... and I was just innocently reading it and then I was like ... oh. =D

[brown_betty]

Thanks for letting me know you liked it!