And..... Life Goes On

Jan 21, 2011 20:28



The continuous high shrill of the flat line permeated the entire room, making ears ring and hearts drop.   A team of doctors and nurses had been working continuously for the last twelve minutes trying to revive the young man. Although the volume on the machine never changed, the longer it stayed constant, the more deafening it seemed to get.

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rating: pg-13, fan fiction, !author|artist: broncotvgirl, luke/reid

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broncotvgirl January 22 2011, 02:57:54 UTC
LOL..... yeah, I tried..... I wanted you to worry at least a bit before being able to cheer at the end :D

thanks!

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f3d0ragirl January 22 2011, 02:50:53 UTC
chris died? oh...uh....*pretends to be sad*

:-P

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broncotvgirl January 22 2011, 02:58:27 UTC
LMAO!!!! He deserves pretend sadness! :)

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95baker January 22 2011, 03:02:45 UTC
I am not sure that was nice or not. I was starting to have a serious panic attack myself. Glad you got it right and Chris did not get his heart.

I can not wait to reid more.

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broncotvgirl January 22 2011, 03:07:05 UTC
LOL.... sorry..... I just couldn't resist the difference of how I would feel if had been Luke vs how I felt knowing it was Chris... I know... Im just mean like that.

glad you enjoyed it! If anyone deserved it, it's him!
part 2 will be posted tomorrow

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nancygrew January 22 2011, 03:02:53 UTC
you actually did manage to worry me! Very relieved Luke is fine [not so secretly thrilled that it was Chris who died]. Love the domesticity of Reid coming home to grab a couple of hours sleep w his boyfriend instead of staying at the hospital.

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broncotvgirl January 22 2011, 03:10:27 UTC
is it wrong of me to cheer that I worried you?

We can all (well mostly all) cheer the demise of the idiot Hughes.

Reid and domesticity.... two words you EVER expected to put in the same sentence? LOL :D

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slayerkitty January 22 2011, 03:07:48 UTC
OH, THANK GOD. You had me going for a sec. :D

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broncotvgirl January 22 2011, 03:12:22 UTC
*giggles* had to do it..... but of COURSE I could never be that cruel! and we all know Chris deserves it!

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slayerkitty January 22 2011, 03:23:37 UTC
Heee, it was pretty awesome. :D

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broncotvgirl January 22 2011, 03:26:54 UTC
Thanks! part 2 will come tomorrow

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