And..... Life Goes On

Jan 21, 2011 20:28



The continuous high shrill of the flat line permeated the entire room, making ears ring and hearts drop.   A team of doctors and nurses had been working continuously for the last twelve minutes trying to revive the young man. Although the volume on the machine never changed, the longer it stayed constant, the more deafening it seemed to get.

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rating: pg-13, fan fiction, !author|artist: broncotvgirl, luke/reid

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bluemagicrose January 22 2011, 03:10:22 UTC
Chris died huh? I'm gonna make like f3doragirl and pretend to be sad.

Gotta say, the lead up was tense. At the beginning I was fearing it was Luke.

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broncotvgirl January 22 2011, 03:17:53 UTC
LOL... yeah, that should be the concensus!

glad you felt it, that makes me very :)
but I promise no Luciano will be harmed in the making of this fic! :D

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murgy31 January 22 2011, 03:15:22 UTC
Welcome back! you were missed! great start!

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broncotvgirl January 22 2011, 03:26:11 UTC
awww, thanks! the creative writing juices are flowing again so I'm working on a few things....

hope you enjoy the conclusion.... I will post it tomorrow

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cas74 January 22 2011, 03:34:42 UTC
LMAO,
You are a naughty girl making everyone worry!!!

Soooooo excited that your posting more in this verse! I've missed you *pouts*

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broncotvgirl January 22 2011, 03:38:46 UTC
you know me....... I like being naughty :D

glad you liked it sweetie! more writing to come.... I promise so put that pretty pout away.... *sigh*

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joliepinkyswear January 22 2011, 03:36:00 UTC
ok...I was a tiny bit worried when I started reading so I scrolled down to the last chapter. Yes, I cheated! I didn't think you'd do something bad to them after all the work you did to put them together in the last one but I checked just in case.
I'm glad your back with a new story...loved the last one. Hope you feel better soon.

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broncotvgirl January 22 2011, 03:43:36 UTC
OMG........ you make me laugh!!!!
Love that you had to cheat.... that makes me so happy I can't even tell you! :) and yes, you know me too well.... I couldn't hurt Luke.

working on a couple things right now... this will just be a little thing... but I think it needed to happen.... just couldn't keep Doogie around...... you know?

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stl29tide January 22 2011, 03:40:01 UTC
Can I just say I started reading and immediately I felt my heart clench and I was like 'No! She wouldn't!' Lmao. I didn't want to believe you'd break my heart like that, but I still couldn't bare to read it if I was going to cry, so I had to scroll down to the very bottom just to make sure it wasn't Luke.

Oh thank god! No offense, but Doogie was a douche. It about time he was put down.

That's not mean, if it's a fictional character, right? I mean...technically he's not real, so it's okay. Right????

Yay! More Brain v. Heart verse! I love this universe and have missed it terribly!

*hugs*

I hope you're feeling a tad better. I know you said yesterday you were still feeling poopy! :(

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broncotvgirl January 22 2011, 03:57:02 UTC
LOL! I know it's totally wrong of me to be happy to make people panic but........ yeah, Im just that sinister :D

Doogie was a douche!!!! so rejoice, Im totally fine with that :)

yep just a little something, but I've got some other stuff stewing around in my head.... so....

*hugs ya right back*

getting there.... but this damn cough is never ending!

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