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eonjekkaji October 14 2011, 16:07:59 UTC
i like how you enabled commenting in both posts js

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eonjekkaji October 15 2011, 04:45:32 UTC
“I’m not going anywhere.”

Dongwoo laughs, low and quiet, and says, “I am, though.”

is my favourite part. it encompassed the very element - core - of this story and i'm glad you've completed it.

i'm completely incapable of giving you a reply akin to the one you gave me but i enjoyed this nonetheless. i hate how they were never able to tell each other how much they loved each other face to face (and you call me the heartless yeoja). the ending was absolutely brilliant. just brilliant.

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deasyellow October 16 2011, 01:08:20 UTC
i never said you're heartless, i just said your heart is as cold as the ocean at night. and i'm not brilliant omg if not for your patience whenever i ranted i wouldn't even be able to finish it ;___________________________;

my love for you, it's infinite ♥

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eonjekkaji October 16 2011, 01:24:45 UTC
is that your attempt at returning my cheese

i wish i was the ocean so that i could encompass you and surround you and then you'll only see me and only me.

the only kind of feels pot you'll ever get tbh.

as mine is with its lack of boundaries and limits ♥

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bloodyrose2442 October 14 2011, 16:21:28 UTC
Spot!

How can you do this to me dear?

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bloodyrose2442 October 14 2011, 16:48:21 UTC
I can't really write anything when I'm shaking so hard and sobbing with voice and my hearts's breaking apart~ I look so ugly right now and it hurts so, so much.

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bloodyrose2442 October 14 2011, 17:05:27 UTC
This. I have no words- only tears, tears, tears (and my snooty sleeves stained with sorrow because ( ... )

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deasyellow October 16 2011, 04:07:00 UTC
i'm sitting here trying to form a coherent reply for you becaue oh my god you wrote me such a beautiful and awesome comment and i feel the need to reply it properly but all i have in my mind is 'JFDKHFAJDHSAJKDH SMOTHERS THIS PERSON WITH MY LOVE' but i don't think it's appropriate and now i'm rambling.

i'm really glad my piece of writing can move you! from this writing i think i want to show how much howon is growing, how his feelings changes along with dongwoo's health, how he copes with dongwoo slowly slipping away, and i hope it can reach you. i'm sorry it made you cry though ;______; and no, what insulting annoying comment my dear god. if anything, this made my entire morning and comments like this actually motivate me to write more and better :)

i don't think i deserve all your compliments because i still have a long way to go, but thank you! everything you said means a lot to me and i'm really happy you like this yadong. thank you for reading ♥

ps: you should totally read that book, it's beautiful c:

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deasyellow October 14 2011, 16:33:22 UTC
spot for aurelynn sobs i love you chelsea ;_______; ♥

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sunlit October 16 2011, 14:21:53 UTC
SOBS DESSY I DO NOT DESERVE THAT MENTION IN YOUR A/N AND LIES OKAY THIS FIC WAS BRILLIANT EVEN WHEN YOU SENT IT TO ME ;A;

sobs but bb i really, really did love this fic! ;_______; even while i was beta-ing, making corrections and focusing more on the grammar and structure instead of the story, i could still feel the sorrow and pain of the story and it was just so heartbreaking. there was a point where i had to stop and breathe for a moment; i was so close to crying and shasdkjhasjdksa this fic is wonderful, really.

i absolutely adore the way you wrote both howon and dongwoo, about how this story is precisely that - this story is howon and dongwoo. the story of their lives, dreams, love. dongwoo just gives and gives and gives and doesn't know how to receive, and so does howon, and the lack of receiving somehow materializes into love and it's so beautiful ( ... )

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whitewires October 14 2011, 16:41:39 UTC
i-i'm literally crying right now in front of my laptop after reading the fic sobs. i'll leave a more coherent comment when i'm not such a mess omg ;_____; dessy ilusm ♥ T______T

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deasyellow October 16 2011, 04:25:48 UTC
;___________________; ilu2 ♥

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tokidoki_sama October 14 2011, 18:10:46 UTC
Wow... in the face of this awe-inspiring flawlessness I have no words. I really wish I could say more but this is all my incoherent brain can come up with at the moment. I loved it. I haven't had a fic make me cry in a long time; it was refreshing. Thank you for such an amazing piece of work.

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deasyellow October 16 2011, 01:10:36 UTC
jfshdgkjhds i'm really glad you like it! i was worried it would bore people with its' length but to hear that you loved it relieves me. i'm sorry it made you cry though ;~;

thank you for reading ♥

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